THE PRODUCTIONS OF TIME THEMES AND ‘ IMAGES IN THE 9OETRY OF THEODORE ROETHKE Thesis four the Dogm of Ph. D. MICHIGAN STATE UNIVERSITY George A. Wolff 1966 7.7: - . mz'fifi‘ 4‘ *..m+- “4'— This is to certify that the thesis entitled THE PRODUCTIONS OF TIME THEMES AND IMAGES IN THE POETRY OF THEODORE ROETHKE presented by George A. Wolff has been accepted towards fulfillment of the requirements for Ph.D. degree in English Date August 15, OCT 25 295W“ Sum, I0~3I-67 v ABSTRACT THE PRODUCTIONS OF TIME: THEMES AND IMAGES IN THE POETRY OF THEODORE ROETHKE by George A. Wolff Although individual poems of Theodore Roethke's have been analyzed in detail, no sustained reading of his work as a whole has yet been published. This dissertation, through a close study of the poet's handling of themes and images, traces the development of his work. The concept that gives order to this study is described by the phrase "the productions of time," which refers to objects and conditions that characterize life in the flux of mortal existence. Critics and scholars have emphasized the mystical and otherworldly elements in Roethke's poetry without pointing out the cause, which lies in his fear and loathing of his "fleshly clothes," sexuality, isolation, and death. A more important snortcoming in the criticism is the failure to stress Roethke's continual attempts to conquer his loathing and fear. This dissertation follows the changing relationship between otherworldliness and worldliness as it appears in the themes and images of Roethke's poems. The discussion of Open House_focuses on the imagery of the inner-outer dichotomy, which is usually related to the conflict between flesh and spirit. Several themes present in this first book and later to be developed more fully are (l) the concept of the life-force as an George A. Wolff irritant, (2) inherited mental (or Spiritual) illness, and (3) the creative process. I discuss the "Greenhouse Poems” both in terms of its imagery which distorts Spatial and temporal relationships and of a theme which I call "the implied human presence." I also examine in some detail here and in my discussion of the later poems Roethke's use of metaphors which blur the distinctions between the animate and inanimate and between plants and animals. My treatment of the "Greenhouse Poems" follows the generally accepted interpretation of the growing plants as symbols for the maturing human identity. In the very complex imagery of the fourteen long narratives, I find certain recurring clusters, an eSpecially important one being an extensive group of container images, which tend to group themselves around the poles represented by grave and nest. The important themes here are (l) the conflicting views of idealism and materialism, (2) evolution, and (3) reincarnation, each of which participates in the protagonist's struggle with his awareness of sexuality, isolation, and death. The poems of the 1950's introduce no important new themes, though they do, in a mechanical way, develop the somewhat over-used images of dancing and burning. These poems clearly fail to carry Roethke forward in his struggle "to embrace the world." The poems of The Far Field, certainly the best that Roethke wrote, bring the basic conflict in his work to its highest pitch. Returning to many of his earlier themes, Roethke clothes them in new images and invests them with a startling energy. The "North American Sequence" employs beautifully handled landscape images to symbolize George A. Wolff the moment of change between two quite different psychic states and to depict the theme of the desire to embrace the extremes of ex- perience. The "Love Poems," the weakest of the book, return to the theme of isolation. In the "Mixed Sequence," Roethke eXplores the "theme of victimization," the relationship between victor and victim, where death is the apparent universal victor and all living things the \ictim. Finally, the "Sequence, Sometimes Metaphysical" is, as Roethke called it, "a drive toward God," but it is also a corrosive vision of the way in which the Speaker's fear of death alters his perceptions and perhaps even creates his God. DeSpite the evidence in Roethke's work that he was out of love with the world, the overall development is toward an affirmation of "The productions of time." THE PRODUCTIONS OF TIME THEMES AND IMAGES IN THE POETRY OP THEODORE ROETHKE By ‘ It I :1 George A.‘ Wolff A THESIS Submitted to Michigan State University in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the degree of DOCTOR OF PHILOSOPHY ‘ Department of English 1966 ACKNOWLEDGMENTS I wish to thank Professors A. J. M. Smith of Michigan State University and Jo DeWeese of Pennsylvania State University, who made many helpful suggestions and shared with me their insights into Roethke's poems. Professors Herbert Weisinger, Sam Baskett, and Russel B. Nye are responsible for many improvements in style and thought. Thanks are also due to my brother, William T. Wolff, Jr., who helped by typing. TABLE OF CONTENTS CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION: ROETHKE AND THE II SENTIENT TO SHOCK . . . . . III SPROUTS OE IDENTITY . . . . . IV THE SHANE OF CIRCULARITY . . Where Knock Is Open Wide . I Need, I Need . . . . . Bring the Day! . . . . . Give Way, Ye Gates . . . . Sensibility! 0 La! . . . . O Lull Me, Lull Me . . . . The Lost Son . . . . . . . The Long Alley . . . . . . The Field of Light . . . . The Shape of the Fire . . . Praise to the End! . . . . Unfold! UnfOld! . . . . . . I Cry, Love! Love! . . . . 0, Thou Opening, 0 . . . . V ANGEL IN THE VOID . . . . . . VI IN THE FACE OF DEATH . . . . North American Sequence . . Love Poems . . . . . . . . Mixed Sequence . . . . . . REVIEWERS Sequence, Sometimes Metaphysical . . Conclusion: Poetry at a Discount . . BIBLIOGRAPHY . . . . . . . . . . . iii 25 47 87 92 106 112 115 122 126 127 151 158 161 165 169 176 180 185 21H 21“ 230 236 2H6 270 27k CHAPTER I ROETHKE AND THE REVIEWERS Thus far the criticism on Theodore Roethke has succeeded in defining a number of problems which require extended analysis. For instance, does his ability increase with time, or does compulsive ex- perimentation lead him into obscurity? When imitating other poets, does he master their effects or echo them hollowly? How does his highly conscious handling of meter, line length, and sound patterns contribute to his poems? And so on. But certainly the most pressing problem is that many poems still have not been given long and hard readings. For that reason, this dissertation offers relatively detailed explications of most of the poems that Roethke thought of as part of his canon. Since he, like Yeats, felt that the order in whichhis poems stood was important, I have followed his arrangement throughout. I have tried to maintain a balance between treating each poem as an autonomous unit and treating each as a step in Roethke's overall development. When I erred, it is in the direction of the fermer. For the most part, I limit my discussions to matters of imagery and theme, taking imagery to include metaphors and symbols, and theme to mean any paraphrasable eXpository statement. When discussing either of these, I will generally move from the details of a particular poem to a higher level of abstraction, where the similarities between a number of poems can be noted. Indeed, if*we look at Roethke's apparently diverse images on a high level of abstraction (e.g., regard grave and nest as containers), we shall see that they are not so diverse after all. Stanley Kunitz observes this same truth when he writes: "Roethke belongs to that superior order of poets who will not let us rest in any one of their poems, who keep driving us back through the whole body of their work to that live cluster of images, ideas, memories, and obsessions that constitutes the individuating source of the creative personality, the nib of art, the very selfhood 0f the imagination."1 This statement, of course, verges on the fallacy of reducing the work of art to a set of data about the artist's personality. But, as the following pages will show, with Roethke this fallacy is especially tempting, fer not only do his images "cluster" tightly, his themes almost without exception originate in that "do—it- yourself" branch of psychology, introspection. Although the critics and reviewers have not yet read Roethke's poetry as closely as it deserves, they have praised it. He felt, as he expressed it in the last year of his life, that he had received un— expected ". . . intensity and love from [his] contemporaries."2 From the time of his earliest publications, he was awarded encouragement and applause, being given the Pulitzer Prize in 1953 for The Waking and the National Book Award in 1958 and again in 196“ (posthumously) fer Words fer the Wind and The Far Field. When he was twenty-seven years lThe Contemporary_Poet as Artist and Critic, Eight Symposia, ed. Anthony Ostroff (Boston, 196u), p. #1. Hereafter cited as Ostroff. Babette Deutsch, John Crowe Ransom, Stanley Kunitz and Roethke teak part in a symposium on Roethke's "In a Dark Time." 2Ostroff, p. u9. At this same time he said that he felt he had also received ". . . close, acute, . . . and devoted reading . . ." from the others, but his reply to their readings qualifies this almost out of existence. old, six.years befere the publication of his first book, Miss Louise Began paid him an important critical recognition. She selected seven of his poems to include in an anthology of new verse and wrote several pages introducing the young poet. Miss Began outlined three tests for recognizing "a young writer who will write," and asserted that Roethke passed every one: "One immediately feels [she continues], the strength of his determination to yield in no way to the poorer tricks of style. His effects, fer the most part, are purely prosodic: they depend cm the shape of his sentences and on their order throughout the poem. We can say that he has a gift for form."1 Miss Began also refers to Roethke's gift for epithet and his keen powers of perception. Roethke's first book, Open House, published in 19u1, earned him some very important praise. W. H. Auden gave it a penetrating and highly favorable review, one passage of which runs as follows: "Many people have the experience of feeling physically soiled and humiliated by life; some quickly put it out of their mind, others gloat narcissistically on its unimportant details; but both to remember and to transferm the humiliation into something beautiful, as Mr. Roethke does, is rare. Every one of'the lyrics in the book, whether serious or light, shares the same kind of ordered sensibility: Open House is completely successful."2 1"Stitched on Bone," Trial Balances, ed. Ann Winslow, a pseudonym for verna Elizabeth Grubbs. (New York, l935), pp. 138-39. 2 "Verse and the Times," SetRL, XXIII (April 5, 19u1), 31. 1 Iii-III. Although more insightful than most, Auden's review is typical in that it attempts to provide the key to a number of poems with one critical utterance, usually this key being simply part of the reviewer's definition of poetry if he likes the works being reviewed and not much help at all in reading any particular poem. Lewis Foster, Jr., who also reviewed Open House quite favorably, praised Roethke for his "simplicity of approach," his "natural and distinct" language, and, repeating Miss Began's words, his "exactness 1 of epithet." Like Auden, Mr. Foster was fortunate enough to make a comment that would apply not only to Open House but to all the sub- sequent poetry that Reethke was to write: "...Reethke ... has a mysticism of his own, of the senses rather than the Spirit. He finds poetry in Yeat's "things uncomely and broken"--a bat, weeds, the "antic grace" of a heron. He is, in the best sense, a realist."2 Foster censured Roethke fer only one thing: "...his technical range is rather limited." But he lightened this judgment by adding that "One trusts that his future technique will show greater boldness."3 This stricture was repeated by two other reviewers. Rolfe Humphries declares that: "What saves Roethke from producing sentimental, ordinary or painful results . . . is the blunt and ebdurate honesty of statement, even at the cost of 1"A Lyric Realist," Poetgz, LVIII (July 19M), 223. 2Foster, 223. 3 Foster, 22“. flexibility of technique . . . ."1 And Stephen Baldanza, who apparently also feels the poet lacks flexibility of a sort, locates the trouble in a deeper source: ". . .Despite the promise of the intro- ductory poem, his revelation [of himself] is not complete; it embodies 2 When Baldanza a caution which is at the core of his poetic impulse." points out the read to improvement, he introduces a question that several critics are to respond to later: "That Roethke is blessed with a noble gift there can be no doubt; but one is certain that the poet has tapped only a vein of his talents. Once he shows more willingness to expose his true self more courageously in form and content he will attain a great stature."3 More than twenty years later Professor Louis Hertz similarly defines the nature of Roethke's "poetic impulse": "The celebration of the naked bone, the bare spirit, and the sealed core is not the central mode of Roethke; it is indeed the very opposite of his true motion, which is to unseal, to let flow forth, to nourish into n I shall return to this question later; right now it is . growth. . . ." sufficient to point out that both Baldanza and Hertz fail to relate their discussions to such highly relevant poems as "The Adamant" and "After Disaster." 1 "Inside Story," The New Republic, CV (July 1n, lQul), 62. 2"Poetry," Commonweal, xxxrv (June 13, 19n1), 188. 3Baldanza, 188. u"A Greenhouse Eden," Theodore Roethkg: Bssgys on the Poetry, ed. Arnold Stein (Seattle, 1965), p. 20. Hereafter cited as Stein. The Lost Sen and Other Poems, published in 19%, was boldly ex- perimental, particularly in the poems of two of its four sections, these later to be called the "Greenhouse Poems" and the four long narratives. These surprising and difficult poems were immediately praised. Miss Began continued to champion Roethke, comparing him favorably with Randall Jarrell: "Where Jarrell frequently only describes, Roethke relives. The Lost Son is written with complete conscious control....Throughout, true emotion gives the chosen style coloration and shape."1 A frequent question in reviews of the "Greenhouse Poems" is whether they are simply poems of natural description or are symbolic. Eugene Davidson, for instance, maintains that Roethke uses "flowers, wind, water, etc." symbolically: "These serve him as images often presented with the clear sharp colors . of the objects and then are transformed into symols of human struggle or contemplation."2 Another review, by Hugh Gibb, illustrates in relation to this question the way in which a perceptive critic can "fix" a group of poems with a "formulated phrase" (which rapidly becomes a cliche) without ever having to support his pronouncements with details of the poems: "But the poems never remain just brilliant descriptions. Effortlessly they assume a wider significance. The nudging shoot, the rapacious weeds and the proud tulip 1 "Verse," Ni, XXIV (May 15, 19158), 118. 2 "Poet's Shelf," 11:, n.s. XXXVII (Sumner 191:8), 7M. heads dramatize the eternal processes of nature to which all life conforms, including the Spiritual life of man."1 When discussing the "Greenhouse Poems," I deal with the question of how the reader knows that they are in fact "symbols of growth." It is surprising that more charges of obscurity weren't leveled against the long poems. Peter Viereck was the only critic to make this objection and even he quickly backed off from his position: "Roethke's The Lost Son...is too obscure (it is time for a frontal assault on obscurity as inartistic...). But Roethke's original imagery and stark emotion-charged vocabulary outweigh all objections."2 In Stanley Kunitz's mind, there were no objections to be out- weighed. He begins his review by saying: "With The Lost Sop,_ Theodore Roethke confirms what some of us have long suspected: that he stands among the original and powerful contemporary poets."3 And he concludes by comparing Roethke's second book with his first: "Roethke's first volume, Open House (19u1), was praised, deservedly, for its lyric resourcefulness,“ its technical proficiency, its ordered sensibility. The present collection, by virtue of its indomitable creativeness and audacity, includes much more chaos in its cosmos; it is 1"Symbols of Spiritual Growth," The New. York Times Book Review. 1 August 19u8, p. in. 2"Five Good Poets in a Bad Year," The Atlantic Monthly, CLXXXII (November 19n8), 95. 3"News of the Root," Poetgz, LXXIII (January 19fl9), 222. “Most of the reviews which touched this point chided Roethke for lacking flexibility of technique. it is difficult, heroic, moving, and profoundly disquieting."1 Certainly the battles fought in the 1920's over the works of Eliot and Joyce made possible this ready reception of poems as difficult as "The Lost Son." In 1950 Kenneth Burke gave an additional impetus to Roethke's career by publishing a ferty-page study, "The Vegetal Radicalism of Theodore Roethke." Although Burke was more concerned with interpre- tation than evaluation, he did imply that he thought more highly of the "Greenhouse Poems" than of the long narratives. Like Davidson, he considers the greenhouse poems symbolic: "Clearly the imagistic figuring Of a human situation...."2 Speaking of perhaps the best of the "Green- house Poems," "Big Wind," he says: "It reveals most clearly how Roethke can endow his brief lyrics with intensity of'ggtiggy...No matter how "3 After brief the poems are, they progress from stage to stage. analyzing the poem in detail, he concludes: "...though you'd never look to Roethke for the rationalistic, the expository steps are here ticked off as strictly as the successive steps of a well-formed argument. And thanks to the developmental structure of such poems, one never thinks of them sheerly as descriptive: they have the vigor, and the u poetic morality, of action, of form unfolding." 1"News of the Root," 225. 2 SR, LVIII (January 1950), 68. aBurke, 69. u In contrast to these conmendatory words for the "Greenhouse Poems," Burke offers the following somewhat disapproving remarks on the narratives: "The long poems are...engrossed with problems of welfare (_S_a_1_l_l_s;), though of a kind attainable rather by persistent dreamlike yielding than by moralistic "guidance of the will."...The infantile motif serves here, perhaps, like the persuasive gestures of sorrow or help- lessness, asq>peal to childless girls vaguely diSposed toward nursing. The lost son's bid for a return to the womb may thus become transformed into a doting on the erotic imagery of the 'sheath-wet' and its 'slip- ooze.'"1 But even this mild censure is considerably tempered when Burke goes on to Spend thirty pages discussing the long poems. Roethke's third book, Praise to the BndI, published in 1951, contained the four narratives from The Lost Son and added to than ten similar poems. Again, the reception was overwhelmingly favorable. Peter Viereck repeats his earlier two-sided judgment: Roethke is "...obsure but felicitous...."2 Two other critics also straddle the fence. Selden Rodman introduces the matter of "sense," which appears in many discussions of these poems, but he feels that: "Roethke at his best does not make 'sense'--he isn't trying to. He is trying, and succeeding as well as any poet can to write a poetry of pure intuition."3 lBurke, 81-82. 2 "Technique and Inspiration, a Year of Poetry," The Atlantic Monthly, CLXXlX (January 1952), 81. a"Intuitive Poet," The New York Herald Tribune Book Week, 2 December 1951, p. 32. 10 Rodman displays his anti-intellectualism -- one cause of cursory reading-- again later in the review: "In its present form, at least, Roethke's verse commicates nothing except to the reader who is willing to surrender himself to the music of suggestive incantation and join the "1 As with Burke's poet on his somnambulistic return to the nursery. cements, one perhaps feels that a slight condemnation is implied. 0n the other hand, Rodman compares the poems with the flower poems of D. H. Lawrence and calls them "...whelly original and mysteriously beautiful evocation[s] of the sexual awakening of an unhappy child":2 Rolfe Humphries once more has something to say both for and against the new book. Roethke, he says, "...is more convincing," than most poets who attempt to "plumb the depths of...[their] own unconscious...."3 But he also finds that one difficulty, "...which the terminology of the unconscious offers, [is] its censorship, its disguise through vagueness...."u This difficulty he feels Roethke has "removed." But there remains another danger that he feels Roethke has not guarded against, that is "the danger...that the rhythms themselves will seem a little obsessed, and they are also astonishingly easy to imitate. . . ."5 l. Rodman, 32. 2Rodman , 32 . 3 "Verse Chronicle," The Nation, CLXXIV (March 22, 1952), 281;. “Humphries , 2 8n . 5 Humphries , 2 8H . 11 Both Rodman and Humphries express or imply reservations about the "sense" of these poems. .One of the men who find these the peak of Roethke's achievement states the issue quite clearly. W. D. Snodgrass, writing about thirteen years after'the book's publication, calls it "...a plunge into the wildest and most experimental poetry of the whole period."1 Then as he comes to the matter of "sense," he falters and takes two paths at once: "Even after the wildest surrealists, that voice [in "Give Way, Ye Gates"] sounds new and astonishing; it could be no one but Roethke. It is an achieved style, carrying much meaning, and touching only tangentially other voices we have heard in poetry."2 That is path number one; we come to path number’twe after’Snedgrass has quoted ten lines of "The Shape of the Fire": "Even now, more than twelve years since these poems appeared, I do not feel that I really understand them, or feel certain how ultimately successful they are."3 Snodgrass feels that the poems "carry much meaning," but he also feels that he does not "really understand them." During his life Roethke was fortunate enough to be admired if not understood. As I shall show in a later discussion, these poems are not "pure intuitions." They can be understood. 1 "'That Anguish of Concreteness'--Theodore Roethke's Carrer," Theodore Roethke: Essays on the Poetry, ed. Arnold Stein (Seattle, , p. . erea er cited as Stein. 2 Stein, p. 80. 3 Stein, p. 81. 12 Let me return for one moment to Snodgrass's interesting essay. Inmediately after the contradiction displayed above he reaches the main point of his argument: "Yet that [that the poems are difficult or impossible to understand] is not the point. The point, I think, is that Roethke had opened out before himself an incredible landscape. He had regressed into areas of the psyche where the powerful thoughts and feelings of the child-the raw materials and driving power of our later lives--remain under the layers of rational and of civilized.purpose. The explorations made possible by this book alone could have engaged a lifetime. Yet Roethke never seriously entered the area again."1 Snodgrass feels that the poetry fellowing Praise to the End! is a falling off. He is practically alone in this opinion. The Waking, Roethke's fourth book, won the 1953 Pulitzer Prize. It was a selection made up almost entirely of poems published in the first three books. Roethke added one poem, "Frau Bauman, Frau Schmidt, and Frau Schwartze," to the greenhouse sequence, and introduced six new poems, written between 1951 and 1953. Many of the reviewers of this book look back at the earlier books and re-evaluate them quite casually. Howard Nemerov, for instance, writes: "Roethke recognizes his own territory quite early, in his first volume, as 'Hy narrow vegetable :realm,‘ but does not take it over fully until the second and third, where, through a disorganization and formlessness which are in some sense superficial, a precondition and a clearing-away, the narrow vegetable realm is seen to be quite inclusive after all, and not without adept arrangement in its riotousness...."2 1Stein, p. 81. Snodgrass here approaches a.point of disagreement among critics: had Roethke read Freud and Jung when he wrote these poems? See my discussion of the poems in the following pages. 2 "Three in One," 55, XVI (Winter 195“), lus. 13 Hayden Carruth provides a similar sweeping reappraisal: "He [Roethke] has turned, after a long apprenticeship in the techniques of standard English verse, to a personal idiom and a compressed, exclamatory line. He does not always avoid the pitfall of obscurity, but his writing is certainly more interesting and more provocative than any other current poetry."1 The only two men to comment on the new poems make diametrically opposed judgments. Nemerov, who finds them inferior to the narratives, writes: "It is a little disturbing to find this poet, in some of his new poems, such as the 'Four For Sir John Davies,‘ returning to the 'world,' to a conventional stanza and syntax, a more conventional kind of statement."2 On the other side we have the judgment made by Hilton Kramaer, not in a review but in an article, "The Poetry of Theodore Roethke," where he points out weaknesses in most of Roethke's earlier verse. His main criticism (he does not specify which poems he is referring to) is that in Roethke's "pm-historical" poetry, the language is "...the loose diction of a point of view which has not yet learned to recognize human moral history as anything separate from life as a primodial "11016-"3 He explains this limitation by asserting that: "Pro-history is a single episode in, the human drama; whereas history, however motley or schematic its content, is a spectacle of great variety.” I "The Idiom Is Personal," The New York Times Book Review, 13 September 1953, p. 1n. 2 Nemerov, 152. 3Western Review, XVIII (Winter 1951+), 132. ”Kranner, 132 . 1'4 Later Kramer charges Roethke with "abStraction" and "primitivism," both of which "...suppress history, and thereby suppress the human image in which our values subsist."l But then Kramer goes on to maintain that Roethke "...abandons some of his tendency toward abstraction....": "...in his latest poems Roethke affirms the human image by means which are largely denied in Praise to the Endl—alyricism of adult emotions, and a humor which is nothing if not social."2 Kramer is not alone in finding fault with Roethke for writing asocial poetry. John Wain writes: "What is wrong with Roethke's poetry is not that it doesn't mentim the New Deal, Pearl Harbor, Little Rock, and socialized medicine, but that it doesn't enter the ordinary human world where these things have their effect."3 Wain explains this by saying that there are "areas": "--of memory, of history, of personal relationships, of opinion, of custom-- which we ordinarily inhabit, and which Roethke's poetry does not allow us, while we are under its sway, to revisit.“ I find it difficult to agree or disagree on this point. The criticism, however, does sound as if Kramer and Wain were asking, "Why wasn't Roethke, Yeats?" Perhaps, as an antidote to the stricture, we should return to Kramer's high valuation of the new poems in The Waking and cite in support James G. Southworth: "The new poems in The Waking (195a) are song the most JKramer, 1%. 2 Kramer, 1&6. 3 "The Monocle of My Sea-Faced Uncle," in Stein, p. 75. u Stein, p. 75. 15 sensitive and.beautifu1 poems that Roethke has written, and among the most sensitive of contemporary poetry."1 Roethke's next book, Words for the Wind, has the subtitle The Collected Verse of Theodore Roethke, and was published in England in 1957 and in this country in 1958, where it won the National Book Award for that year. It is divided into two parts, the first being The Waking in its entirety (the "New Poems" become "Shorter Poems, 1951-1953"), and the second comprising thirty-nine new poems, in five groups. As with The Waking, many of the reviews pass judgment on all of Roethke's favor, there is a growing body of adverse opinions. At this point, we come to the problem of Roethke's emulation of Yeats, which is perhaps the point most sharply contested among those who have published comments on Roethke. In my opinion, Roethke's echoing of Yeats does damage his poetry, and I believe that on this point the balance of Opinion is against Roethke. Babett Deutsch, one of the first to comment on this matter, defends him; in fact, she entitles her review "Roethke's Clear Signature": "Evidence of his devotion to Yeats is not limited to the pages written in his memory ["The Dying Man, In Nemoriam: W. B. Yeats"], but there is no subservience here."2 John Berryman, in a review full of high praise, sets apart the work from 1951 on: "Since 1951 his jokes have become less sinister and desolate; and although he has written delightful poems, l "The Poetry of Theodore Roethke," 9E, XXl, (March 1960), 329. 2The New York Herald Tribune Book Week, 7 December 1958, p. 3. 16 one has a sense of a marking of time in relation to the giant steps earlier. Surprisingly, much of his work has become "literary"; he has submitted gleefully to the influences-mostly disastmus--of Yeats, even Eliot, and others."1 Thom Gunn, more censorious than Berryman, writes that: "Somewhere around the end of the 'forties the verse turns more rational, but at the same time it starts showing the influence of Yeats. . . . It is, quite simply, pernicious. In the later poems of the collection, it is the ghost of Yeats Speaking, or the ghost of Roethke, or a merging of the two ghosts--it is anything but the living Roethke."2 W. D. Snodgrass, who like Berryman considered the "New Poems" of The Waking a marking time, is as decided in his con- demnation of the "New Poems" of Words for the Wind as Gunn. He writes: "In Words for the Wind, Roethke's collected poems, the new direction appeared. It was a shock. There had been hints that Roethke was interested in Yeats's voice, hints that he might follow the general shift in mentieth-century verse by following wild experimentation with a new inrmalism. No one could have expected that Words for the Wind would contain a series of sixteen "Love Poems" and a sequence, "The Dying Man," all in a voice almost indistinguishable fr~our--Yeats's.":3 Snodgrass believes that after this Roethke never again found his own voice. In 1 "From the Middle and Senior Generations," ASch, XXVIII (Sumner 1959), 381;. 2"Poets English and American," :5, n.s. XLVIII (June 1959). 52"- 3 Stein, p. 82. l7 speaking of Roethke's last book, he says that the "...language has become strangely decayed...,"l owing to Roethke’s acceptance of a religious orthodoxy. Snodgrass writes that: "The desire to lose one's own form has taken on a religious rationale to support itself. Where Roethke's earlier free-verse poems were neasiy always pure explorations, his most ambitious free-verse poems now try more and more to incorporate a fixed and predetermined religious and irrational certainty."2 His explanation of this statement--which at last returns us to Roethke's use of Yeats and Eliot--appears twa pages later, couched in scientific, especially psychoanalytic, terms: "Eliot's ideas and Yeat's cadences rushed in to fill the vacuum of the father~model which could have made this world bearable, yet which Roethke either could not find or could not accept."3 Although these quotations, taken from widely separated parts of Snodgrass's argument, may appear somewhat unrelated, they are in fact, the high-points of a cogent line of reasoning. I do not share Snodgrass's preference of the long narratives to the last poems, nor do I accept his "diagnosis" of Roethke's problems; I do, however, think that his argument is interesting, ingenious and often insightful. Many others, among them W. T. Scott, Stephen Spender, Edwin Muir and Delmore Schwartz, reviewed Words for the Wind, lining up on one side or the other in the argument about Roethke's growth or decline. The argument, of course, continues. After Words for the Wind, Roethke 1Stein, p. 91. 2Stein, p. 89. 3 Stein, p. 91. 18 published, in 1961, a book entitled I Am! Says the Lamb, containing the "Greenhouse Poems" and twenty-two "Nonsense Poems," five of which had appeared as "New Poems" in Words for the Wind. It was reviewed in only two places, The New Yorker and Poetry. Both reviews were favorable. On August 1, 1963, Roethke died, several weeks after completing preparations for his next volume, The Far Field.‘1 If the "New Poems" in Words for the Wind evoked more adverse criticism than the earlier work, The Far Field restored the balance. I share the opinion of the majority of the reviewers that it is Roethke's best book. Stanley Kunitz, for instance, regards it as: "...unquestinnably one of the landmarks of the American imagination...."2 X. J. Kennedy writes in his review of The Far Field: "At times, reading his collection Praise to the End! (1951), I have suspected him of saving up his lucky phrases in notebooks, then yoking them with Roman numerals into a continuity. I feel this about none of these beautiful poems. And the shade of Yeats that haunted his work a few years ago, while still visible in the finely chiseled poems, has been absorbed successfully." William Jay Smith also finds these poems the peak of 1The only evidence that Roethke did make these preparations is a statement by Stanley Kunitz: "A few weeks before his death Roethke com- pleted his arrangement of some fifty new poem, published last July under the title, The Far Field. "Roethke: Poet of Transformations," The New Re ublic, CLII (January 23, 1965), 26. Kunitz does not indicate the source of his information. 2 "Roethke: Poet of Transformations," 26. 3"Joys, Griefs and 'All Things Innocent, Hapless, Forsaken'," The New York Times Book Review, 23 August 1961:, p. 5. 19 Roethke's achievement: "Never...has his musical sense seemed more apparent than in these last poems....Nor his technical mastery seemed surer."1 Certainly the most extreme praise given Roethke at this time comes from James Dickey (who is not, incidentally, commenting on The Far Field): "Theodore Roethke seems to me the finest poet now writing in English. I reiterate this with a certain fierceness, knowing that I have put him up against Eliot, Pound, Graves, and a good many others of deservedly high rank.... The best of Roethke's poems are very nearly as frightening and necessary as 'darkness was upon the face of the deep,‘ and as simple and awesome as 'let there be light.'"2 In a review of Sequence, Sometimes Metaphysical, a section of The Far Field.published separately, Dickey does not repeat the judgment just quoted, but does refer to "Roethke's marvelous sensous apprehension of the natural world--finer in its way than Rilke's because more immediate, less withdrawn and contemplative...."3 This 13 high praise, indeed. On the other hand, several reviewers join Snodgrass in seeing the last poems as something less than Roethke's best work. Hayden Carruth gives a detailed statement: "Some of these poems, perhaps fifteen of the whole forty-eight, seem to be unfinished work. At least they contain errors in composition that Roethke almost certainly would have corrected, though since we aren't told how or'by whom the book was assembled, con- jecture is useless. It is best to disregard these poems. Ten or twelve-of the rest are very good Roethke indeed, the equal, or nearly, 1 "Verse: Two Posthumous Volumes," Herpers, CCXXIX (October l96u), law. 2The Suspect in Poetry (Madison, Minnesota, 196h), p. 58. 3"Theodore Roethke," Poetry, cv (November 196k), 120. 20 of anything in his previous work. On every page one finds, as expected, something quite brilliant, even if only a line or a word."1 Carruth 2 And goes on to say of the book as a whole that "These poems fail." he attributes this failure to Roethke's fear of dying, which "deepens into a terrible malady."3 William Meredith makes a similar judgment, which he buttresses by recalling a conversation that he had had with the late R. P. Blackmur, who was to have reviewed The Far Field: "When I talked with him [Blackmur] about the book he expresses misgivings (which I share) about some of the poems and particularly about the six longer'poems gathered at the front...tmder the title "North American Sequence." The sure voice and images of some of Roethke's earlier poems in the free form are undercut here by occasional diffuseness and mannerism. ... I think Blackmur meant simply that he usually wrote better." In my opinion, the poems of the "North American Sequence". are not diffuse. They appear'to be prose-like natural descriptions, but in actuality they are highly organized and concise poems. They seem to me to be freer of mannerisms than most of Roethke's other poetry. By way of concluding this survey of the critical reception of Roethke's verse, we may look at the ‘one full-length volume so far published on Roethke, Theodore Roethke: Essays on the Poetry, edited by Arnold Stein and published in 1965. In addition to an introduction by 1 "Requiem for God's Gardener," The Nation, CLXXXXIX (September 28, 196%), 168. . . 2 Carruth, 169. 3Carruth, 159. “floogitating with his Finger Tips," The New York Herald Tribme Book Week, 18 July 1965, p. M. 21 the editor, it contains nine essays by men of established reputation. We find here the same diversity of judgments that was noticeable throughout the preceding survey. I shall simply quote a sampling. Stephen Spender, for instance, writes that: "There is this Yeats-obsessed side of Roethke..., one is impressed by this; but what one loves is the poet of Beatrix Potter details, not the rhapsodic bard.”-L Louis L. Martz agrees with this view. He writes of the "Greenhouse Poems": "The sequence is one of the permanent achievements of modern poetry: its poems deserve to cling to future anthologies like Marvell's "Garden" or Wordsworth's poems about daffodils."2 Later Martz states that "Roethke never surpasses the achievement of The Lost Son, though many of his later poems are filled to the same brim."3 Opposed to this we have John Wain's statement that "...there is a stylistic development that goes onward from the beginning of his career to the end."u On the matter of Roethke's use of other poets, Wain writes: "...his emergence into the foreground of an individual utterance is habitually in the shadows of one or other of his grand masters. This disadvantage, which made Roethke so easy a target for the disapproval of reviewers... almost to the end. But not quite to the end. His last, posthumous collection, The Far Field, brings in the harvest of those years of 1 "The Objective Ego," Stein, p. 6. 2 "A Greenhouse Eden," Stein, p. 27. 3Stein, p. 35. u "The Monocle of My Sea-Faced Uncle," Stein, p. 69. 22 single-minded dedication to poetry."1 Finally, let me quote from Ralph J. Mills, Jr., who more than anyone else has concerned himself with explicating Roethke's poetry: "Theodore Roethke, it seems to me, is one of our great American poets; and in 'North American Sequence' and 'Sequence, Sometimes Metaphysical' he has left us not only some of his finest work but a number of the most astonishing mystical poems in the language."2 Although, as we have seen, the reviewers praised Roethke highly throughout his career, these same reviewers disagree among themselves about which portion of his work is the best. It is, of course, difficult to prophesy intelligently about the resolution of this disagreement. If I were to attempt to do so, however, I should say that eventually Roethke's reputation will benefit from the disagreement. We shall come to feel that we are not forced to chose between the "Greenhouse Poems" and the "North American Sequence." The notion that the style is the man and that a "sincere" writer should.perfect only one style is patently romantic. It is a notion that even the writings of James Joyce have not been able to overcome. But I feel that slowly this concept of ,literature is changing. Thom Gunn believes that, "Words fer the Wind... is a disconcerting book, for it is written in several completely different styles, which appear to derive from several completely different attitudes toward poetry." If I am right, in the long we will praise I Stein, p. 71. 2"In the Way of Becoming, Roethke's Last Poem," Stein, p. 135. 23 Roethke for his versatility rather than condemn him for hypocrisy or inconsistency . The preceding survey covers only statements of an evaluative nature made by the reviewers. The remainder of this dissertation will in a sense survey the interpretative statements made by the same writers. Most of the explications that are at all detailed (and few of them are) approach the poetry in terms of psychoanalytic criticism, eSpecially Jungian, or Western mysticism. This dissertation follows neither of these paths, though one cannot deny their usefulness. The purpose of this dissertation is to demonstrate that despite the different styles with which Roethke experimented, throughout his career he expressed only a few themes in terms of remarkably few clusters of images. In other words, the apparent multiplicity of both themes and images can be traced to only two or three main roots. The title of this dissertation refers to what I consider one of the most important roots of Roethke's poetry. It alludes to one of the "Proverbs of Hell" in Blake's "The Marriage of Heaven and Hell": "Eternity is in love with the productions of time."1 More than any- thing else, Roethke's poetry is a vivid presentation of reasons for both loving and despising "the productions of time." He moved, tlroughout his life, between idealism and materialism, and between renunciation and sensualism, usually not attaining the extremes. One 1 The Poetry_ and Prose of William Blake, ed. David V. Erdman with commentary by Harold Bloom (New York, 1965), p. 35. 214 of the main sources of difficulty in understanding his poetry (as is ‘true also of Yeats' work) is his lack of a clearly defined idea of what he considers to be the alternative to life in time. In other words, he did not adhere to a philosophical or religious orthodoxy, as did Eliot and.Stevens.- He attempted, though, to understand why he loved what he did and why he loathed and feared what he did, and in large part, the strength of his poetry lies in the honesty and perspicacity of his attempt. In the following chapters, I shall employ the term "the productions of time" in discussing groups of Roethke's poems. The term's meaning will change slightly when applied to different groups, though its basic denotation will remain constant. Fundamentally, it refers to whatever in the world of time and Space excites the love or loathing of the speaker of the poems. This will usually be something tangible, but not always: the human personality and.death, for instance, though intangible, are "productions of time." 'A few of the changes in the term's meaning are as follows: in Qpen House it refers to the personality and the body; in the "Greenhouse Poems" it refers to the environment as it affects the plants' growth; in the long narratives, to the parents' effect on a child and to the origins and evolution of life; in the poems of the early 1950's,to sexual desire and death; and in The Far Field it refers to the abstractions "human experience" and death. CHAPTER II SBNTIBNT T0 SHOCK Throughout his poetry Roethke employs the ancient, widely accepted idea that reality is dualistic, that everything can be subsumed under the terms "mind" and "matter." For Roethke the dualism appears in a form with a slightly different focus, for the words he most frequently uses to express it are "flesh" and "spirit." Many of his images, eSpecially in gen House, are traditional symbols for one or both parts of this dichotomy. He speaks, for instance, of the flesh as a "house," a "garment," and a "cage," and of the spirit as "marrow," a "core," and a "heart." He does, however, depart from the usual treat- ment of these terms by at times giving them meanings associated with cer- tain concepts of modern psychology: the spirit becomes the individual personality (perhaps, more narrowly, the id), and the flesh becomes the acquired customs by which the individual adapts himself to society (resembling the super-ego; the voice of the speaker mediates between the two, playing the role of the ego). Frequently in Open House, the speaker accepts the traditional attitudes that regard the Spirit as good and the body as evil. In a number of poems, however, the Speaker declares that his spirit is diseased or is wild (resembling the id). He explores various means of curing or taming his spirit, of achieving peace, but on the whole the book presents no particular therapy. The theme of the diseased spirit takes on wider 25 26 significance in many poems through being transformed into the conception that all life is a "disease" of inanimate matter. It is this emphasis on the painfulness of being alive (and of being conscious) that gives me the title for this chapter. gen House contains thirty-five poems, divided into five roughly equivalent groups. The principle governing the grouping is the relation- ship between the Speaker and the themes. In Section I the speaker feels threatened by the matter at hand. He is discussing the failure of a direct assault of reason or consciousness on the deeper parts of his psyche; the tone often suggests that he is almost overwhelmed by fear and despair. He is, in fact, very close to being the "spiritual coward" "whose guard was lowered" in "Prognosis" (91, p. 7). The poems of Section II may be seen as an extreme form of withdrawal from the pains discussed in the preceding group. Almost none of these poems of natural description mentions anything that pertains directly to human existence. When they do refer to mankind, it is with ironic mockery: A man's head is an eminence upon A field of barley spread beneath the sun. ("In Praise of Prairie," 92, p. 23.) And, ...something is amiss or out of place When mice with wings can wear a human face. ("The Bat," O_H_, p. 29.) These poems, in their studied avoidance of human reference and of abstractions, take their place as forerunners of the "Greenhouse Poems." In Section III the speaker returns to the themes of Section I, but replaces the direct assault with the indirection of humor and bravado. Rather than being overwhelmed, he now has the strength to assert himself, 27 even while recognizing his own limitations: The rough, the wicked, and the wild That keep the Spirit undefiled. With these I match my little wit And earn the right to stand or sit.... ("Long Live the Weeds," 9H, p. 35) The "spiritual coward" of Section I has now grown brave enough to say: This flat land has become a pit Wherein I am beset by harm, The heart must rally to my wit And rout the specter of alarm. ("Against Disaster," 95, p. 38.) Section IV also contains poems whose themes could become painful for the Speaker, but here he takes the offensive and turns his humor against other people, as in "Academic": The stethoscope tells what everyone fears: You're likely to go on living for years, Hith a nurse-mide waddle and a shop-girl simper, And the style of your prose growing limper and limper. (9H, p. #5) The "you" in this poem does not mean "one," that is, does not include the Speaker as part of the reference. On the contrary, the speaker, throughout Section IV, is forming the boundary line of his identity by ridiculing (separating himself from) people who are similar to him in certain respects. He has placed himself in the genus "intellectual," or, perhaps, "author" or "poet," and in these poems he emphasizes the differentiae that distinguish him from other members of the class. In Section V the Speaker attains his greatest success in delivering himself, to use his words (9H, p. #9), "from all / Activity centripetal." These poems treat subjects that are of interest not to the Speaker personally, but to another person, to society, or to mankind at large. Rolfe Humphries observes that "Toward the end of the book, the 'Lull,’ 28 for instance, or 'Highway: Michigan,‘ [both in Section V] the consciousness al- is social as well as personal.... The two poems of Section V in which the "I" is present, "The Reminder" and "Night Journey," both establish the Speaker's detachment.2 I do not maintain that the preceding definitions of the five sections are so accurate that they account for the placing of every poem. They do, however, fairly well describe the differences between the various groups, and, more importantly, they drm: attention to Roethke's experimentation with theme, point of view, and tone. Anyone who follows the preceding discussion while at the same time examining the poems will also acknowledge the truth of Miss Louise Bogan's statement that "One immediately feels.... . the strength of . . . [Roethke's] determination to yield in no way to the poorer tricks of’style."3 The title of this chapter is a variation upon a line from one of the poems in Section I, "Death Piece": His thought is tied, the curving prow Of motion moored to rock; And minutes burst upon a brow Insentient to shock. (9!, p. 6.) These lines touch on three concerns that are important throughout Roethke's poetry, the landscape of the mind, time, and the "shocks" to which the flesh and spirit are heir. The third of these informs most of 1"Inside Story," The New Republic, CV (July 1“: 19"1): 52- 2The application of this statement to "Night Journey" will be explained in the discussion of that poem to follow. 3 "Stitched on Bone," Trial Balances (New York, 1935). p. 138. 29 the poems in this volume, working primarily through the imagery of flesh and spirit, through the pervasive theme of the diseased Spirit, and through explorations of various ways of finding peace. Before discussing particular poems, I should say‘that I do not generally dis- tinguish between an image and a metaphor or Simile. Wellek and Warren in The Theory of Literature do not find it necessary to make such a distinction: "Is there any important sense [they write] in which 'symbol' differs from 'image' and 'metaphor'? Primarily, we think, in the recurrence and persistence of the 'symbol." And 'image' may be invoked once as a metaphor, but if it persistently recurs, both as presentation and representation, it becomes a symbol, may even become part of a symbolic (or mythic) system."1 Most of the images in this book are, in fact, metaphors, and if we ignore certain individuating details in various occurrences (i.e., if we abstract them), we can justifiably call them "symbols." The poems in Open House as a group contain more abstractions than any other group of poem that Roethke was to write. Only the pieces in Sections II and V are descriptive to any considerable degree. Host of the poems do not contain fully sketched pictures or other detailed sensory descriptions, but however do contain a large number of metaphors (again, more than any other poems by Roethke). Let us look at the metaphors in the title poem, "Open House." They are as follows: "secrets g1," "heart keeps gen house," "doors are widely swung," "love [is] an epic of the eyes," "love [has] no disguise," "naked to the bone," "nakedness [is] my shield," "myself is what I .wear," "the Spirit [is] spare [meaning 'lean'J," "the deed will speak," "stop the lying mouth," 1(New York), 1956, p. 178. 30 "rage may ... cry," and "witless agony," (9H, p. 3; my italics). From the figures dealing with the house, disguise, nakedness and the shield, one can gather that the poem employs a distinction between something inner and true and something outer and concealing or protective. Roethke has consented on this poem at some length: The human problem is to find out what one really _i_§_: whether one exists, whether existence is possible. But how? "Am I but nothing, leaning toward a thing?" I think of what I wrote and felt nearly thirty years ago in a period of ill-health and economic terror—the first poem of my first book. [Here Roethke quotes the second and third stanzas.] All of this has been said before, in Thoreau, in Rilke. I was going through, though I didn't realize it at the time, a stage that all contemplative men must go through. This poem is a clumsy, innocent, deeperate asseveration. I am not Speaking of the eupirical self, the flesh-bound ego; it's a single word: myself, the aggregate of the several selves, if you will. The spirit or soul--should we say the self, once perceived becomes the soul?--this I was keeping "spare" in my desire for the essential. But the spirit need not be Spare: it can grow gracefully and beautifully likela tendril, like a flower. I did not know this at the time. In this prose statement-written thirty years after the poem-~Roethke changes his point of emhasis (perhaps in a way designed to protect himself). The poem tells us that the speaker's spirit is not living in its "house" in the dignified manner expected of it. Rather it has wrested control from some other agency and is now making a spectacle of itself: that which it should hide for its own protection, it is pro- claiming aloud. If one includes evidence from other poems in the book, one can say that the Spirit is troubled or even diseased and is seeking peace through a Whitmanesque laying-bare. Perhaps this is what Roethke l"cu 'Identity,'" in On the Poet and His Craft: Selected Prose of Theodore Roethke, ed. Ralph J. Hills, Jr. (Seattle, 1965), pp. 20-21. Hereafter cited as Poet and Craft. 31 means when he calls the poem "a clumsy, innocent, desperate asseveration." On the other hand, when he maintains that the poem is about the schooling of the Spirit, he believes this early attempt at a Straightforward statement of his spiritual pain. It would be impossible to deny the presence of such a statement in "Feud" (9H, pp. u—S), the second stanza of which runs: Exhausted fathers thinned the blood, You curse the legacy of pain; Darling of an infected brood, You feel disaster climb the vein. Although the imagery employs the distinction between inner and outer, it seriously confuses the two. The "disaster" climbing the vein surely represents inherited mental or Spiritual illness, and as such should be inner, which it is in the lines of stanza three: There's a canker at the root, your seed Denies the blessing of the sun. . . But in stanzas four and five the illness is separated from the Spirit. The uncontaminated Spirit is represented as the defender of a walled city, and the illness is embodied in the image of the attackers. The poem describes the attackers as being in the city and as having been let in by "Spies." These last two stanzas perhaps dramatize the speaker's effort to believe that his disease can be amputated, that it is not part of the Spirit's identity. The confusion between inner and outer reflects the difficulty the speaker has in believing this. These last two stanzas read: The dead leap at the throat, destroy The meaning of the day; dark forms Have scaled your walls, and spies betray Old secrets to amorphous swarms. 32 You meditate upon the nerves, Inflame with hate. This ancient feud Is seldom won. The spirit starves Until the dead have been subdued. The dead, of course, represent the past, or more Specifically the ancestors who have passed on the illness to the Speaker. As in "Open House" the Spirit's "secrets" are being revealed. The defense of the inner from the outer breaks down: the individual's psychological defenses fail and he is betrayed to others, to "the amorphous swarms." This poem indicates that the complete Openness, treated as something of a virtue in the preceding poem, is actually an enfbrced suffering. The poem in Open House that most fully employs the dualistic imagery of flesh and Spirit is "Epidermal Macabre" (Qfl, p. 37). Although the Speaker makes it perfectly clear that he loathes his own physicality, he does not make it clear whether his Spirit is healthy or ill. The implications are that the spirit is troubled, but troubled because it is in the flesh, and that it could find peace if it could "dispense I With [the] false accoutrements of sense." Since virtually every image in the poem pertains to the inner-outer dichotomy, I shall quote the poem in full: Indelicate is he who loathes The aspect of his fleshly clothes-- The flying fabric stitched on bone, The vesture of the skeleton. The garment neither fur not Vair, The cloak of evil and despair, The veil long violated by Caresses of the hand and eye. Yet such is my unseemliness: I hate my epidermal dress, The savage blood's obscenity, The rags of my anatomy, And willingly would I diSpense With false accoutrements of sense, To sleep immodestly, a most Incarnadine and carnal ghost. 33 When the speaker calls his body "the cloak of evil and despair," he may be saying that it conceals and protects an evil and deSperate soul. Of course, he might also be saying again in this line that the cloak is evil, but I think not. In any case, the poem is certainly an ex- pression of the theme that life is painful. And if we emphasize the references to sentences and to the unconsciousness of sleep, we can say further that consciousness is an irritant, perhaps a disease, in nature. If this reading is accurate, and I believe that it is, then there is a very deep-seated ambivalence in Roethke's poetry. 0n the one hand, he expresses the traditional Platonic and Judao-Christian belief that the spirit is good and is, during mortal life, entangled in the evil world of physical existence. On the other hand, he sometimes ex- presses the belief that the life-force itself, eSpecially that extreme development of it that we call "consciousness," is an irritation in inanimate nature. The escape from the pain of life and consciousness is insentience or oblivion, as described in the last no lines of "Epidermal Macabre" and in "Death Piece" (91, p. 6). The ambivalence is essentially a vacillating between philosophical idealism and materialism. As the poems in this first book Show, Roethke found many reasons to loathe and fear life amid the "productions of time," but the overall direction that his work takesis. toward an acceptance of physicality and death; not, it must. be- added,.at-the menseof his idealism but through a change and intensification of it. He comes to . . . 1 see, as Blake and Whitman saw, that "All finite things reveal infinitude." l "The Far Field," The Far Field (New York, 196“), p. 28. 31} The clearest statement in Qpen House of many of the seminal ideas of Roethke's poetry can be found in "Genesis" (95, p. 36). The poem describes man as an outgrowth of inanimate nature, as a victim of "wisdom," probably awareness of his own mortality, and as the creator of a protective covering of "meaning," which may be the comforting illusions of art: This elemental force Was wrested from the sun; A river's leaping source Is locked in narrow bone. This wisdom floods the mind, Invades quiescent blood; A seed that swells the rind To burst the fruit of good. A pearl within the brain, Secretion of the sense; Around a central grain New meaning grows immense. The wisdom seems to be the knowledge that man (or all life) arose out of inanimate nature and shall return to it; in other words, it is knowledge of mortality. The imagery of inner and outer appears in the last two lines of stanza two and in stanza three. The lines in stanza two do not follow the pattern of the flesh-spirit dichotomy as they at first may appear to do. The "seed" is not the Spirit or the life-force, 'but the awareness of one's genesis and one's end. This awareness may on a higher level of abstraction stand for all consciousness, and the swelling of the rind and the bursting of the fruit may represent the cycle that moves from insentience to awareness, to oblivion. In the last stanza the image of a piece of fruit is replaced by the image of a pearl. We no longer have a seed as the initiator of development but an adventitious irritant. The image curiously resembles Freud's 35 description in "Beyond the Pleasure Principle" of the origin of an internalized seat of consciousness. Since some of his remarks clarify many of Roethke's poems, I will quote at length: Let us picture a living organism in its most simplified possible form as an undifferentiated vesicle of a substance that is susceptible to stimulation. Then the surface turned towards the external world will from its very situation be differentiated and will serve as an organ for receiving stimuli. Indeed embryology, in its capacity as a recapitulation of developmental history, actually Shows us that the central nervous system originates from the ectoderm; the grey matter of the cortex remains a derivative of the primitive superficial layer of the organism and may have in- herited some of its essential preperties. It would be easy to suppose, then, that as a result of the ceaseless impact of external stimuli on the surface of the vesicle, its substance to a certain depth may have permanently modified, so that excitatory processes run a different course in it from what they run in the deeper layers. A crust would thus be formed which would at least have been so thoroughly "baked through" by stimulation that it would present the most favorable possible condition for the reception of stimuli and become incapable of any further modification. [In other words, sense organs would be formed. Freud continues in the next paragraph: But we have more to say of the living vesicle with its receptive cortical layer. This little gragment of living substance is suSpended in the middle of an external world charged with the most powerful energies; and it would be killed by the stimulation emanating from these if it were not provided with a protective shield against stimuli. It acquires the shield in this way: its outermost surface ceases to have the structure proper to living matter, becomes to some degree inorganic and thenceforward functions as a Special envelope or membrane resistant to stimuli. . . . By its death, the outer layer has saved all the deeper ones from a similar fate . . . . In highly developed organisms the receptive cortical layer of the former vesicle has long been withdrawn into the depths of the interior of the body, though portions of it have been left behind on the surface immediately beneath the general shield against stimuli. These are the sense organs. . . .1 Although Freud describes a sensitive layer that withdraws to the organism's interior and protects itself with a "shield" and Roethke 1 The Standard Edition of the Complete Psychological Works of Si und Freud, trans. James Stracheyiin collaboration with Anna Freud. Vol. XVIII ZLongon, 1955), pp. 27-28. 36 describes a "grain" that surrounds itself with a "secretion of the sense," there is a great similarity between the two statements. Freud's account is based on the philosophical doctrine of materialism, which Roethke explores in many poems. "Genesis" can be read as a depiction from the point of view of materialism of the origins of life and con- sciousness. Also, both Freud and Roethke picture the consciousness as ‘the home of pain, as something in need of protection and concealment. Roethke's conception of the Spirit bears a resemblance not only to Freud's description of the brain and sense organs but also to his model of the psyche: the deeper into the mind you delve, the farther into the past you go. The second and third stanzas of "The Unextinguished" (QE, p. 3H) use fire to symbolize the consciousness or perhaps psychic energy, an image which conveys the previously discussed association of awareness and pain: The fire of heaven dies; a fire unseen Wanes to the febrile smoldering of sleep; Deep-hidden embers, smothered by the screen 0f flesh, burn backward to a blackened heap. But morning light comes tapping at the lid, Breaks up the crust of cinders that remain, And pokes the crumbled coal the ashes hid, Until thought crackles white across the brain. The word "unseen" suggests the intangible and Spiritual nature of the "fire." The "screen of flesh" is not so much a shield as a prison, within which the ebbing vital energy regresses to earlier and earlier fans of existence. Roethke apparently pictures the glowing heat as burying itself deeper and deeper in the substance and uses this action to symbolize the penetration of awareness into the unconscious mind during sleep, a return to early experiences, perhaps to the origin. 37 The last stanza brings us to the progressive part of the cycle and the painful crackling of thought, which accompanies awakening and the turning of awareness to external reality. "The Unextinguished" is the earliest occurrence in Roethke's poetry of an exploration below the surface of the psyche. Writing an introduction to his poetry to accompany a group of poems in Mr. John Ciardi's Mid-Century American Poet_S_ (1950), Roethke defines this important element of his work: I believe that to go forward as a Spiritual man it is necessary first to go back. Any history of the psyche (or allegorical journey) is bound to be a succession of experiences, similar yet dissimilar. There is a perpetual Slipping-back, then a going- forward; but there is some "progress." Are not some experiences so powerful and so profound (I am not Speaking of the merely compulsive) that they repeat themselves, thrust themselves upon us, again and again, with variation and change, each time bringing us closer to our own most particular (and thus most universal) reality? We go, as Yeats said, from ex- haustion to exhaustion. To begin from the depths and come out-- that is difficult; for few know where the depths are or can recognize them; or, if they do, are afraid. Although the device of the allegorical journey does not come into full use until The Lost Son and Other Poems (19%), at least one Other poem in Open House reveals it in germinal form. The explicit treatment of the journey may appear to carry no psychological Significance in the poem "Night Journey" (9!, pp. 69-70), but if one examines the POGIII'S metaphors such significance becomes apparent. I quote the poem in full and italicize the metaphors and puns: Now as the train bears west, Its rhythm rocks the earth, And from. my Pullman berth. I stare into the night While others take their rest. Bridges of iron lace, A suddenness of trees, 1"Open Letter," reprinted in Poet and Craft, pp. 39-"0- me facilitj poem With u; VOlume: and he was able equal merit "thm&r’u F suggeStive g- '5: 38 A lap_of mountain mist All cross my line of sight, Then a bleak wasted place, And a lake below my knees. Full on my neck I feel The straining at a curve; My muscles move with steel, I wake in every nerve. I watch a beacon swing From dark to blazing bright; We thunder through ravines And gullies washed with light. Beyond the mountain pass Hist deepens on the pane; We rush into a rain That rattles double glass. Wheels shake the roadbed Stone, The pistons jerk and.§h3ve, I stay up half the night To see the land I love. The facility with which Roethke invests the natural description in this poem with unobtrusive symbolic values makes it the best poem in the volume, and fortunately Roethke was learning his craft well enough that he was able to follow this performance with a whole series of works of equal merit. The metaphors of "Night Journey," with the exception of "tflrunder," refer to the realm of womanhood.and are particularly Suggestive of care for an infant. Several puns reinforce this metaphorical reference. The word "bears" in line one carries in light Of the rest of the poem overtones of the meaning "give birth." "Pullman berth" is actually two puns, "berth" suggesting "birth" and "Pullman" suggesting an obstetrician. The presence of these covert mefillings also may rest on the associations in traditional symbolism b“Ween mountains and night with woman. But what is the Significance of these buried references? It is, t° r'e‘tmrn to Roethke's statement of 1950, to describe one of those "° - . experiences so powerful and so profound . . . that they repeat 39 themselves. . ., each time bringing us closer to our own most particular (and thus most universal reality.".1 The experience described is birth. The poem's development is from repose into harsh- nes s. The repose begins to end with the description of a strain that may well resemble in part the strain an infant feels during birth: Full on my neck I feel The straining at a curve; My muscles move with steel, I wake in every nerve. "Wake," an important word in Roethke's poetry, in later poems carries the meaning of birth. Immediately following these lines, in the burst of light and the sudden thunder, the imagery depicts a flood of sensory impressions, such as impinge on the senses of a baby at birth. Then the poem moves on into suggestions of having passed through something, of an increased harshness (compared to the initial state), and of slightly subdued sensory experience now that the first rush is past. These last lines also seem to convey a sense that something has been left behind forever and that one has entered a new and relatively lasting state: Beyond the mountain pass Hist deepens on the pane; We rush into a rain That rattles double glass. Wheels shake the roadbed stone, The pistons jerk and shove, I stay up half the night To see the land I love. 1 Poet and Craft, p. 39. 2 . Possibly the mist deepening on the pane (pain) represents the gradual lessening of the intensity of sensory experience after the mitial trauma. ‘40 One sees the subtle craftsmanship of which Roethke was capable by comparing two lines, a regular iambic trimeter, describing the repose, and an irregular four—beat line, describing the harshness: Its rhythm rocks the earth, and, Wheels shake the roadbed stone. The last two lines, in their expression of curiosity and love, and in the ambivilanoe that must be in them since the love follows immediately upon the pain, are fitting emotions for a poem describing the impressions of a new-born child. If "Night Journey" dramatizes the mental traveler's attainment of one of the psyche's most deeply buried memories, "The Gentle" (95, p. 60) presents the Sprititual coward who has declined the trip: The son of misfortune long, long has been waiting The visit of vision, luck years overdue, His laughter reduced to the sing-song of prating, A hutch by the EXIT his room with a view. The "depths" that Roethke Spoke of in his "Open Letter" of 1950 are the symbolic container that is the womb, the nest (home) and the grave. The gentle is one of those people who are too terrified to move, and who consequently cannot make the return trip, the homecoming, which Roethke megards as Spiritual progress. What does Roethke think is gained by making this journey? fin House does not give us the answer, but it does introduce some ideas that are relevant to the answer. It tells us that reason is a worse than useless faculty, and that peace is an imaginable but probably un- attainable ideal. "Pregnosis" (2H, p. 7), employing some obvious imagery 0f the inner-outer dichotomy, pictures reason as a helpless cow, Victimized by the forces of the unconscious mind: The last n burning Hi? Again the ‘ here the f« "depths" i Ir. failure of The firm that thou; rather, t' discover a bEtter Seats "tr "depths" 1+1 Flesh behind steel and glass is unprotected From enemies that whiSper to the blood; The scratch forgotten is the Scratch infected; The ruminant, reason, chews a poisoned cud. Tire last two lines of this poem recall the image of psychic energy trunning within a.coat of ashes during sleep ("The Unextinguished"): I Chill depths of the Spirit are flushed to a fever, The nightmare Silence is broken. We are not lost. Again the Spirit is pictured as something to be journied into, and here the fever, which is psychic energy or the life-force, in the 'hdepths" is responsible for a rebirth. In "The Adamant" (9H, p. 16) we see a fuller description of the fadJmme of reason. I quote the entire poem: Thought does not crush to stone. The great sledge drops in vain. Truth never is undone; Its Shafts remain. The teeth of knitted gears Turn slowly through the night, But the true substance bears The hammer's weight. Compression cannot break A center so congealed: The tool can chip no flake; The core lies sealed. The first line of the poem is distractingly ambiguous. It could mean then: thought cannot be crushed or pulverized, but it does not. It means, I"a‘ther, that thought--which is reason or consciousness-«fails to discover truth. (The "gears" turning "through the night" make "awareness" a better gloss for "thought" than "reason" is.) Because the poem repre- sents "truth" as the "core" of a boulder, we can equate it with the "depths" of the Spirit. In a sense, the poem dramatizes the strain of ' a false or misguided attempt to journey to the depths. I s peaCE, an 1 enies that is a worth”? Open House. form in "T "Compressb brutal for may be tha tell us th lat alone The only 5 does not , outwapd. H< is a Para and the s pIOration that tam artistic fan" SY-l Kir 142 I said earlier that the goal of the journey might be to achieve peace, an idea made eSpecially plausible by the fact that Roethke (buies that rational understanding, one of the few possible incentives, is a worthy goal. One method of obtaining this peace is explored in Qpen House, but not unequivocally accepted. We see it in abbreviated f orm in "The Adamant": Compression cannot break A center so congealed.. . . "Compression" here equals thought, "the great sledge." If the direct, brutal force of "compression" doesn't uncover the truth, the implication may be that something indirect and subtle will. But the last two lines tell us that this is not the correct implication: The tool can chip no flake; The core lies sealed. Let alone crack the boulder in two, this tool cannot even chip a flake. The only implication possible is that the "congealed" center, which does not react to "compression," may of its own accord expand or fly outward. How is this dispersal related to a journey inward? The answer is a paradox Similar to Heraclitus' "The way up and the way down is one and the same."1 The diSpersal that is at the same time an inward ex- Ploration is artistic creation, at least by some romantic definitions of that term. (This conception also resembles Freud's definition of artistic creation, in which the artist, like the neurotic, indulges his fanta sy-life, but unlike the neurotic gives it outward expression.) 1 Kirk and Raven, p. 189. as "Open House," we will remember, describes the speaker's disorderly spirit doing everything but lying sealed in the core. Several details are overt references to the realm of art: An epic of the eyes My love, with no disguise. And, The deed will Speak the truth In language strict and pure. Contrary to "The Adamant," this poem pictures the inner exploding into the outer, and if the "tool" in that poem partakes of the will, here the revelation is almost entirely unwilled. The last line of "Prognosis" presents a Similar revelation in terms of a recovery or rebirth: "The nightmare silence is broken. We are not lost" (_C_)H_, p. 7). The entire poem "Prayer Before Study" ((11, p. ‘19), which needs no gloss, bears on this theme: Constricted by my tortured thought, I am too centered on this Spot. So caged and cadged, so close within A coat of unessential Skin, I would put off myself and flee My inaccessibility. A fool can play at being solemn Revolving on his spinal column. Deliver me, O Lord, from all Activity centripetal. But I have said that Roethke, at the time of gen House, was ambivanelt about this self-revelation. I have shown that in "Feud" (Qfl. pp. l$05) he likened the exposure, which was compulsive, not "illed, to the betrayal of "old secrets to amorphous swarms." In am "Reply to Censure" ((21, p. 39), the Spirit is not pictured as the obsessed victim of hereditary illness, and consequently is not in need of the peace sought in other poems. Instead of advocating the open-door policy, this poem implies that that is a symptom of Spiritual cowardice: The brave keep undelfiled A wisdom of their own. The bold wear toughened Skin That keeps sufficient store Of dignity within, And quite at the core. Immediately following this poem is one, "Against Disaster" (O_H_, p. 38), that employs the imagery of dispersal to illustrate an extreme, self- destructive- anxiety: Now I am out of element And far from anything my own, My sources drained of all content, The pieces of my spirit strewn. All random, wasted, and diSpersed, The particles of being lie; My Special heaven is reversed, I move beneath an evil sky, This flat land has become a pit Wherein I am beset by harm, The heart must rally to my wit And rout the Specter of alarm. I regret quoting the whole of this poem, which I consider one of ROethke's worst, but it does clarify some of the better ones. For insalience, the imagery of diSpersal corroborates my reading of the last Sta112a of "The Adamant." The heaven's being "reversed" and the land's becoming "a pit" return us to the concept of the depths as a form of syntholic container, and what we are being told here is that the womb (mireversed sky) has become a grave. 45 Finally, in one poem the Speaker declares the exact converse of the statement made in "Open House." His Spirit is not dignified and quiet as was that of the brave man in "Reply to Censure." It is, rather, the diseased spirit of so many of these poems, but it firmly resists the dispersal of the inner into the outer, the activity centrifugal. The poem describes at length the diseased Spirit, so I quote it in full: There is a noise within the brow That pulses undiminished now In accents measured by the blood. It breaks upon my solitude-- A hammer on the crystal walls Of sense at rapid intervals. It is the unmelodic ring Before the breaking of a string, The wheels of circumstance that grind So terribly within the mind, The spirit crying in a cage To build a complement to rage, Confusion's core set deep within A furious, dissembling din. If I should ever seek relief From that monotony of grief, The tight nerves leading to the throat Would not release one riven note: What shakes my skull to disrepair Shall never touch another ear. This poem, like "Feud" (931, pp. u-s), separates the disease from the 8[beaker's identity. It is within, yet it "breaks upon . . . [his] solitude." This poem uses the same images of mechanical strain that we saw in "The Adamant" (91, p. 16), but here, in contrast, the "core" is ChaOtic. And last, the "I," in a strangely clinical manner, maintains that he is imprisoned with his rampaging disease and that, through no "5-11 of his own, the secret of this disease will never be divulged. In ' than those in understa perimentati The images of them bei 0f the fort eight. I a (h, p. 8), volume deal question in l with the b: an existeml than that : amiStic C” this PNbL 1+6 In my opinion the poems in Open House are appreciably poorer than those in Roethke's other volumes, but are none the less important in understanding the later works. They reveal highly conscious ex- perimentation in point of view, tone, imagery, and rhyme and meter. The images and themes are for the most part traditional, the handling of them being sometimes prosaic and trite, and at other times original. Of the forty-five poems in the book, Roethke chose not to reprint twenty- eight. I agree with his selection, excepting only "To My Sister" (OH, p. 8), which I would also exclude. Most of the poems in this *volume deal with the nature of the Spirit, especially as it interacts with the body and with the external world. Roethke begins here a questioning that is to last throughout his life: does the Spirit have an existence independent of the body? In Open House we learn no more than that reason cannot help discover the truth and that perhaps artistic creation Can. The next book continues the examination of this problem. I. Greenho They contin cons ciousne' The connotation Stanley Kur. "The sub-1m Coming aliv clearly ref beth fascin I Will mt discuss the One subtle Way my f0? one else: “Sual W H] "1 1965, p. 2. CHAPTER THREE THE SPROUTS OF IDENTITY I. Greenhouse Poems: Description or Symbol? The "Greenhouse Poems" are not merely natural description. They continue from gen House the idea that life and more especially consciousness are an irritant, but whereas in the earlier book the connotations of this idea were negative, here they are ambivalent. Stanley Kunitz in 19% pointed out this ambivalence when he wrote: "The sub-human is given tongue; and the tongue proclaims the agony of coming alive, the painful miracle of growth."1 In 1965 Kunitz more clearly refers to the speaker's ambivalence: "The boy of the poems is both fascinated and repelled by the avidity of the life-principle . . ."2 I will return to this notion of ambivalence in the speaker when I discuss the individual poems. One of the most striking things about these poems is the subtle way in which they avoid being merely descriptive. It is very easy for one to say that a given description is an analogue to something else, usually to something spiritual. Most of the reviewers of The Lost Son and Other Poems did not hesitate to make this assertion. 1"News of the Root," oetgz, LXXIII (January 19%), 225- 2"Roethke: Poet of Transformations," The New Republic, 23 January 1965, p. 23. H7 1+8 For instance, Eugene Davidson wrote of Roethke's images' being ". . . transformed into symbols of human struggle or contemplation."l And Hugh Gibb explained more elaborately: ". . . the poems never tremain just brilliant descriptions. Effortlessly they assume a wider significance. The nudging shoots, the rapacious weeds and the proud tulip heads dramatize the eternal process of nature to which all life conforms, including the Spiritual life of man."2 But these reviewers do not tell their readers that finding the preper ground in the poems for this analogical leap is a most difficult and interesting matter. One suggestion fer moving from literal description into symbolic meanings is found in John Middleton Murray's The Problem of Style, where he defines "the-discovery of the symbol" as: ". . . the discovery of some analogy or similitude for the writer's emotion or thought which would exercise a kind of compulsion upon the mind of the reader, so that, given an ordinary sensibility, he must share the emotion or the ex- perience that the writer intended him to share."3 In developing this idea, he introduces the term "crystallization": "The crystallization is, as it were, automatically accomplished; for the only way he [the poet] can communicate his emotion is by describing the objects which aroused It. If his emotion was a true one, the vividness and.particularity of his description will carry over to us."u ¥Z§ (Summer 19n8), p. 787. 2 The New York Times Book Review, 1 August 19n8, p. in. 3(London: Oxford Paperbacks, 1960), pp. 86-87. Hereafter cited as Hurray. u Murray, p. 89. 99 Most readers who have published their impressions of the "Greenhouse Poems" have maintained that the poems are extremely accurate descriptions and are emotionally moving. According to Murray's views, they would then merit the term "symbolic." As an example of this type of poetry, Murray quotes the following lines from a poet much admired by Roethke: To note on hedgerow baulks in moisture sprent The jetty snail creep from the mossy thorn With earnest heed and tremulous intend. Frail brother of the morn, That from the tiny bents and misted leaves Withdraws his timid horn And fearful vision weaves. This is the second stanza of John Clare's "Summer Images," and it cleamdy resembles Roethke's "Greenhouse Poems." Murray's comment on these ' lines is that "Only a man who loved the snail could possibly have such a delicate knowledge of it. Thus, quite simply, the cause of the emotion becomes the symbol."1 James Reeves, who has edited Clare's poems, makes two statements that parallel those of Murray and that serve to reveal the similarity between the two poets. He writes: "One might read pages and pages of Clare's poems and suppose them to be 'merely descriptive.‘ If that heppens, one is deceived."2 Then he restates the connection Murray has seen between "true emotional reaction to objects 1Murray, p. 90. 2 "Introduction" to Selected Poems of John Clare, ed. James Reeves (New York, 1957), p. xiii. The introduction was written in 1953. 50 of the external world" and "keen sensous perception":l PC1are's minute observation, his lingering over the details of a country scene, his intense interest in the plainest and most homely manifes- tations of life on the land, could arise only from a disinterested and self-forgetful love."2 Although Roethke does not make the connection for us between his "lovely dimunitives" and his precise descriptions, he does fifteen years after the publication of these poems, Speak of his love for the lowest forms of life: "He [God] is . . . accessible . . . in the lowest forms of life. . . . Nobody has killed off the snails. Is this a new thought? Hardly. But it needs some practicing in Western society. Could Reinhold Niebuhr love a.worm? I doubt it. But I—-‘we----can."3 If Professor Murry is correct, such an emotion is sufficient to raise the poems above the level of simple nature poetry. So far I have mentioned two possible grounds for regarding the poems as something other than pure natural description, the theme of life and consciousness as irritant, and Murray's connection between symbolized emotion and description. I want to mention one more ground that has been suggested by commentators and then define three that have not been. 1 Murray, p. 90. 2Reeves, p. xiv. Another statement of Reeves's denies that Clare's emotion was "self-fergetful," but not that it was love: "When Clare writes from his sympathy with small and helpless creatures, he is really thinking of himself," p. xx. 3 . "0n 'Ident1ty,'" a statement made at a Northwestern University panel on "Identity" in February, 1963, printed in Poet and Craft, p. 27. 51 James G. Southworth, in an article on Roethke's entire output prior to 1960, makes the following statement, which seems to apply to the "Greenhouse Poem," though he does not specify the application of his remark: ". . . he [Roethke] has looked so steadily and perceptively at the minutiae of nature that his symbol-free early descriptions in the light of his later work assume a symbolic quality."1 However, like the reviewers, Southworth does not back up his word "symbolic" by relating to the details of the poem. He begins his discussion of the poem with one paragraph on gen House and then turns to the "Greenhouse Poem," irmnediately stating that they are ". . . a conscious attempt of the poet to examine his early life . . . and the purgative effect achieved by such an investigation. The struggle is a painful one, symbolized in the opening lines of 'Cuttings' (late version)." Southworth then quotes the following lines to prove that the poem are symbolic: This urge, wrestle, resurrection of dry sticks, Cut stems struggling to put down feet, What saint strained so much, Rose on such lapped limbs to a new life? His cement is: "In the earlier version [of 'Cuttings'] there is no sense of the poet's association of his personal problem with that of the cuttings."2 In other words, a description is symbolic if it convinces 1"The Poetry of Theodore Roethke," XXI (March 1950). 327- Here- after cited as Southworth. 2 Southworth , 32 7 . the reader Tnis is 885 Southworth earlier (188 The the Subje thirteen reveal th between t‘ 52 the reader that the object describee evoked an emotion in the poet. This is essentially a restatement of Murray's argument. Unfortunately, Southworth does not amplify his own idea that the later poems transform earlier descriptions into symbols. The three characteristics of the "Greenhouse Poems" that I ‘wish-to bring out are: (1) the implied human presence, (2) the temporal and spatial distortions, and (3) the syntactic distortions. All three, I feel, represent conscious design in the poems and life them to the level of symbolic significance. Roethke's concern for the differences between writing in the first, second, or third person can be seen in Open House, where he attempts all three. In fact, as I have pointed out, the grouping of poems in that volume depends on the relation between the speaker and the subject. In this series of poems, only five of the original thirteen contain a first person pronoun, and these five themselves reveal the "1's" presence only grudgingly. 'Southworth's contrast between the earlier and later versions of "Cuttings" turns on this point. The explicit presence or absence of the "I" is, however, only one aSpect of what I have called "the implied human presence." The other two characteristics, distortion of spatial and temporal relations, and syntactic distortion, are perhaps in a means- end relationship, the second being a means of showing the first. But I have separated them because the spatial-temporal distortions are at times presented thematically, rather than grammatically. Usually, though, the effect of the syntactic distortions is a blurring or a transformation of space-time relationships. An interesting and unnoticed 53 fact about the "Greenhouse Poems" is that they are arranged in an order jparalleling the growth of a plant, beginning with the abrupt and Ibrumal creation of a new plant (a cutting), and continuing with its taking root, passing through a period of intense growth, of cultivation by the "weed puller," of blossoming, of reproduction and maturity, and finally of its coming to the "flower-dump" and the intimations of "the ‘weather of'eternity." My discussion fellows this arrangement of the poems. II. A Reading of the "Greenhouse Poems" I mentioned that the "I" in "Cuttings (later)" (£§, p. 10) is an explicit statement of human presence; however, the title of "Cuttings" itself (E§, p. 9) implies that presence, since "cuttings" are made by men. As I hope to show in my subsequent treatment of this idea, the "human presence" has the significance to the Speaker of parental care for a child. The plants themselves are frequently associated with or identified with (I will not say symbolic of) the child. The word "slip" in the line, But still the delicate slips keep coaxing up water, is a common metaphor for a slim boy (usually "a slip of a boy").1 Other metaphors in the poem reinforce this reading by describing the child's world as well as the plants: "22g3£1_loam," "coazing," and perhaps "nudge" and "horn." "Sugar" and "coaxing" work together very effectively to suggest the plant-child analogy. ‘ The two meanings of "slip" are also joined in "scion." See The Concise Oxford Dictionary. 5H "Cuttings (later)" differs from the preceding poem in that it makes an explicit comparison between plant and man, and by introducing the "I." The linking of the "resurrection" of the cuttings with the martyrdom of a saint is a superb figure. Moreover, the connotations of cruelty and pain that are involved in beginning the series of poem with "cuttings" rather than bulbs or seeds possibly hark back to "Night Journey" and the theme of life-force as irritant, which was seen throughout Open House . Is the "I" of the poem a boy, or a man recalling his early life? The question cannot be answered with certainty because of what I have called "syntactic and temporal distortion." "Cuttings" is written as a declarative sentence, comprising six independent clauses, all in the present tense.. The syntactic distortion begins in the first section of "Cuttings (later)" with an anacoluthon: This urge, wrestle, resurrection of dry sticks, Cut stems struggling to put down feet, What saint strained so much, Rose on such lapped limbs to a new life? Not only is there a syntactic break at the end of the second line, but there is also an apparent shift in tense. "Struggling" is a present participle, but "strained" and "rose" are finite verbs in the preterite. The second section continues this refusal to locate the experience in time. The tense-marking verbs here are in the present, but they are the historical present and the present of general truth. The use of the word "beginnings" contributes to this "temporal distortion," by renaming Part of the plant in such a way as to focus attention on its place in a temporal scheme . 55 What is the significance of this type of distortion? Con- ceivably, the grammatical details that I have mentioned parallel or even reveal the theme of the miraculous "temporal distortion" of a saint's resurrection to a new life. There is a further significance, which at this point may be only tentatively advanced, and that is that the use of the historical present or the present of general truth blurs the distinction between the individual and the Species. For instance, the lines, When sprouts break out, Slippery as fish, I quail, lean to beginnings, sheath-wet, do not describe a unique experience but a recurring one. One may easily see this device as an incipient form of the search-for-identity theme, the principal theme of The LastSon. In "Cuttings (later)" the "I" feels some sense of human guilt for forcing the plants to reproduce in a painful way. This is shown by the reversal of two faded metaphors, once taken from the realm of plants and applied to men, "lapped " and "nub," but now reversed in order to describe the sufferings of the "cuttings." It is also shown by the Speaker's assertion that, I can hear, underground, that sucking and sobbing, In my veins, in my bones I feel it. . . . "Root Cellar" (E, p. 11) continues this sense of human guilt, but here again the human presence is only implied. The primary aim of the poem is to create the picture of an environment that is at once a goad to life and a stifling enclosure. This ambiguity is found in the title, Where "cellar" brings to mind "cell," the basic unit of living sub- stances , a revealed i‘: sentences attention declaratiw and, The first aims of t sentence for old In clause is live and E implying I "cellar,' made Oij a pictun (princip t° be to t0 the 1 by the 33 if it “With? aCtion. 56 stances, and the meaning "underground room." More importantly, it is revealed in the envelop-type structure of the poem, two declarative sentences with an exclamatory sentence between them. The poet draws attention to this structure by making the first clauses of the declarative sentences nearly identical: Nothing would sleep in that cellar . . . and, Nothing would give up live. . . . The first of these lines achieves additional force in establishing the aims of the poem by rhythmically and thematically echoing the first sentence of a famous poem with a similar intention: "That is no country for old men," from Yeat's "Sailing to Byzantium." While this first clause is saying that everything in the cellar that had1 potential to live and grow was forced by the environment to do so, it is also implying human presence (and ultimately guilt) through such words as "cellar," "ditch," "boxes" and "crates." Notice that all of these man- made objects are forms of enclosure. This first sentence also conveys a picture of sinister sexuality, through implicit and explicit means (principally, of course, through the words "lolling obscenely"). The exclamatory sentence has no verb, and its main purpose seems to be to introduce the noun "stinks." This word gives a Special force 1: o the last sentence: Nothing would give up life: Even the dirt kept breathing a small breath. lln discussing, the poem, I shall remove the ambiguity created by the main verbs being either past or future and treat the action as if it were in the past. "Would sleep," although called "future Conditional," can describe either an habitual past action or a future action. 57 "Breath" here naturally suggests the old meaning of Spirit, and, as in Open House, the Spirit is suffering almost as if in hell. A tenuous reading might identify the Speaker (in his boyhood?) with the plant life, and the (negligent?) greenhouse owner with a parent. Such a reading would be an example of Southworth's previously cited theory that the later poems transform the earlier ones from description into symbol. I said, in discussing "Root Cellar," that everything with the potential for life and growth was forced by the environment to live and grow. But the last line of the poem confuses the living things and the environment. Dirt is not living, but even it "kept breathing a small breath." The strategy of the next poem, "Forcing House," (LS, p. 12)'is to create the effect of an intensification of life through this confusion of organism and environment. The title relates the poem to my reading of "Root Cellar," but whereas in that poem the human presence is essentially one of negligence, here it is a "forceful" domination. The beginning of the blending (or confusion of organism and environment) comes with the picture of all the plants, which are catalogued in lines one through four, pulsing "with the knocking pipes." It is advanced with the two parallel participial phrases: Swelling the roots with steam and stench, Shooting up lime and dung and ground bones. . . . To say that the "knocking pipes" swell the roots and shoot up lime, etc., is to abridge a complex, causal sequence. Although that the pipes cause the rootsto do such and such may be the principal meaning of the lines, the moment of hesitation. caused by the difficult abridgement allows the reader time to suspect that the pipes are inside the plants, in other words, are the capillaries of the plants. And it that ar of the Here, 1 as does sense 1 this p< "Root I flOFlS‘ enviro' indica This 1 the re growth "campy Sun-me diffic time a theEn Cannot at Ohm 58 And it is the capillaries of the plants rather than the heating pipes that are likely to carry "lime and dung and ground bones." The last line of the poem adds to this impression: As the live heat billows from pipes and pots. Here, the metaphoric use of "live" explicitly fuses the two realms, as does the linking of "pipes" and "pots." This fusion creates a sense of the life processes being intensified many times over, although this poem lacks an accompanying sense of loathing that one sees in "Root Cellar." Possibly, this lack is related to the care of the florist that is manifested in the "live heat" as opposed to the negligence implied in the preceding poem. "Farcing Hsuse" not only employs a confusion of organism and environment but also one of Space and time. The distortion here is indicated thematically, not grammatically: Fifty summers in motion at once. . . . This line is set in apposition to the participial phrases, "Swelling the roots . . ." and "Shooting up lime . . .," so that the accelerated growth is equated with a compression of time. Of course, the notion of "compressing" time treats time as a Spatial quantity. Furthermore, "summer" is a noun, but is the name of a duration of time. It is difficult to conceive of a duration of time "in motion": to do so treats time as an object in a Spatial framework. The normal distinctions be- tween space and time are further blurred by the fact that one summer cannot occur simultaneously with another, and here we are given fifty at once. 59 "Weed Puller" (ES, p. 13) uses syntactic distortion to avoid locating the experience in time. Since there is not a finite verb in the entire poem, the action could have been completed in the past, he continual, or be occurring in the present. CorreSponding to this lalurring is the oblique treatment of human presence. Although the title names a human agent, that agent does not act as the subject of any of the verbals in the poem. We are given a series of participles idiose subject we infer to be the weed puller. His presence is mentioned in only two lines: With everything blooming above me, and Me down in that fetor of weeds. . . . Since the intention of the poem seems to be to create a sense of this speaker's identification with, and perhaps over-reaction to, the plants, these lines are crucial. We gain some notion of the speaker's very different but equally strong identifications with the weeds and the flowers through some evaluative words and through the use of names. Three lines of the poem have honorific connotations, those describing the flowers above the benches: With everything blooming, above me, Lilies, pale-pink cyclamen, roses, Whole fields lovely and invialate. . . . The word "invialate" indicates that the Speaker does not associate these flowers with their own "black hairy roots," Those lewd monkey-tails hanging from drainholes. . . . On the other hand, he feels himself somehow sullied by his job of Tugging all day at perverse life: The indignity of it! 60 If the flowers, which are specifically named, retain their identities, "invialate," the weed puller himself is in danger of losing his, for the weeds do not have the individuality that the flowers do. Instead of being named, they are referred to as merely "fern-shapes," or as "weeds," or "perverse life." The threat to the speaker's identity is seen in the lack of a grammatical subject for the verbals, and seen thematically in his animal-like posture and his similarity to the living-dead: Crawling on all fours, Alive in a slippery grave. By calling himself a "weed puller" rather than a gardener or a young florist, the Speaker also suggests that he feels his identity is un- established, associated with the nameless weeds. "Orchids" (£§, p. 1n) extends this theme of identity, focusing on the orchids alone. They differ from the lilies, cyclamen and roses, which seem to represent normally established identities. The orchids are over-develOped identities or else pampered ones that consider themselves "necessary angels." Whereas the other flowers sit on concrete benches, these hang in "mossy cradles." They are feared rather than admired. The theme of human care is suggested.by the references to the heat, the whitewashed glass, and the "mossy cradles." But the effect of this care is pictured in the line: So many devouring infants! An excess of care has turned them into monsters: 61 Adde r-mouthe d , Swaying close to the face, Coming out, soft and deceptive, Lips neither dead nor alive, Loose ghostly mouths Breathing. After "Orchids" we come to perhaps the weakest poem of the sequence, "Moss-Gathering" (_L_S_, p. 15) which rewords the theme of man's guilt acquired through his "desecration" of "the whole scheme of life." Unlike "Root Cellar" and "Cuttings (later) ," where the Speaker's guilt was presented more or less dramatically, "Moss-Gathering" simply declares : . . . Something always went out of me when I dug loose those carpets, . . . afterwards I always felt mean. . . . I cannot see how this piece differs from expository prose. "Big Wind" (I_S_, pp. 16-17) I feel is the best poem in the series. Its principal aim is to create a sense of ideal human care, anaim it achieves by employing subtle handling of the human presence and the distortion of the spatial and temporal relationships. Although the human presence in the poem is very important, it is only made explicit twice: So we drained the manure-machine . . ., We stayed’all night. . . . In the poem, human care preserves the flowers during a bad storm. T'his care exhibits three remarkable qualities: ingeniousness, 62 endurance, and selflessness. The first describes the idea and action of running liquid manure through the steam pipes when the water was cut off by a storm. The second is seen in the workers' staying all night, Stuffing the holes with burlap. . . . And the third is illustrated by the emphasis that the Speaker places on the rose-house itself rather than on her human caretakers: But she rode it out, That Old Pose-house. e e e Thistenphasis runs through the last thirteen lines of the poem. Kenneth Burke has pointed out that the poem moves in four rhetorical steps: definition of the situation (lines l-S), description of an appropriate action (lines 6-20), restatement of the action in figurative terms (lines 21-31), and a "gesture of assertion" (lines 32-33).1 Steps one, three, and four each employ several metaphors, but step two employs only one, "life heat". The effect of the metaphors is a spatial and temporal distortion, such as we have already seen in "Cuttings (later)" and "Forcing House." How does it work here? The poem. describes (or narrates), primarily in Spatial terns, an ordeal that was endured (all the finite verbs are preterite) Over a period of time. It begins by asking, Where were the greenhouses going . . . ? The question gives a stationary object Spatial motion. The motion Of the buildings is described as a "Lunging into the lashing Wind. ,. . ." 1 "The Veggtal Radicalism of Theodore Roethke," SR, LVIII (January 1950), 70. 63 During the literal narration of the human action (Burke's step 2), attention shifts from the greenhouses to one rose-house. Steps 3 and It are an extended trope ". . . that likens the hothouse [rose-house] to a ship riding a gale."1 But Burke moves too fast. He does not point out the striking fact that the "ship" actively battles the storm rather than passively rides it out. The emphasis is on the motion of the "ship," when in reality the men on such a vessel would try to prevent its moving. Literally it is the storm that moves-~not the rose-house or the ship. The final lines of the poem beautifully blur the dis- t inctions between spatial and temporal frameworks: She sailed into the calm morning ,2 Carrying her full cargo of roses. These lines cap a poem which has given a stationary object motion in order to describe that object enduring something over a period of time; here the attributed motion carries the unmoving building into a period Of time. In "Cuttings (later)" and "Forcing House," where Space and time are also translated one in terms of another, the effect created is one of a miraculous intensification of life. In "Big Wind," it is the man-made environment, not living things, that is the central concern. Here, as in "Cuttings (later) ," the poet reapplies terms of Plant life that were once borrowed from that realm to be used as l Burke, 70. 2 A printer's error that escaped the proofreader in I Am! Says the Lamb suggests the unconventionality of this type of distortion. There the line reads: "She sailed until the calm morning. . . ." (I Am, p. 59.) 61+ metaphoric descriptions of other things. In "Cuttings (later) ," he made "lopped" and "limbs" describe both saints being martyred and slips being cut from plants. In "Big Wind," the "ship" (metaphor for rose-house) and the storm (literal) are described in plant and animal metaphors. The storm is said to have "teeth," a "core," and "pith." The "wind-waves," a term that is a meeting point for the literal and figurative elements, are "flailing" and "wearing themselves out." The metaphoric ship is "ploughing" and "bucking," and roses are spoken of as the "cargo." I have compared this poem with "Cuttings (later)," but it can also be compared with "Forcing House," for, as in that poem, there is a blurring of the distinction between organism and environment, between the living and the non-living. "Old Florist" (£S_, p. 18) develops the comment made on human presence in "Big Wind." It also recalls "Root Cellar" in that it is the first poem after that one to avoid making any declarative statement. The significance of this is increased when one notices that the four following poems, which conclude the "Greenhouse Poems," do not contain a single declarative sentence. The principal function of this refusal to write in conventionally grammatical sentences, what I have called "syntactic distortion," is to present the Special nature of the temporal and Spatial relations already indicated. Sometimes the Special nature Of these relations is a translation of one into the other, of spatial i nto temporal or 14.9.9. m. At other times, the purpose seems to be tO make location of the experience in time impossible. This, in turn, lends the described experience an air of universality, of time- lessness, and also blurs the distinction between the individual and 65 the Species. "Old Florist" may be considered wither a series of parallel absolute constructions or an exclamatory sentence of many clauses, all built around the core: How he could flick and pick Rotten leaves or yellow petals. . . . In either case, there is only one indication of tense, that is, one marker of the location of the experience in time, the verb "could" in the lines just quoted. The poem admiringly states that there exists a human whose attributes are those depicted in "Big Wind": inventiveness, endurance, and selflessness. The selflessness is seen in the Speaker's refusal to describe the man himself, or to name him. His only characteristics are the actions he performs in carying for the plants. (Possibly, he is related to the identityless Speaker of "Weed Puller." Like the weeds, he is not named but referred to by his shape: "That hump of a man. . . .") His inventiveness is almost miraculous in its power over life and death: He could drown a bug in one Spit of tobacco juice, 0r fan life into wilted sweet—peas with his hat. . . . And, as in "Big Wind," his endurance is shown by his caring for the plants throughout a difficult night: He could stand all night watering roses, his feet blue in rubber boots. A poem that Sheds some light on "Old Florist" is "Frau Bauman, Frau Schmidt, and Frau Schwartze," which Roethke added to the sequence When it was published in The Waking.l Although it is not non- 1 The Wakingz (New York, 1953), pp. us-uu. 66 declarative like the last five poems in the original sequence, it presents as they do the Spatial-temporal distortion in thematic terms. The poem comprises three main parts, perhaps corresponding to the names in the title, a reminiscence of the women caring for the plants, a description of one of the women playing with the Speaker when he was young, and a comment on the presence of the women in the present life of the Speaker. These women are themselves described much more fully than the implied figures in the other poems, more fully than the old florist, and more fully than the Speaker himself. They, too, however, are mainly characterized by the actions they perform in caring for the plants and the boy. Here, certain sexual undertones, which may also be present in "Old Florist," add an interesting aSpect to the description. What are the important qualities of the three women? One is that they represent a kind of order for the speaker. The description of their work makes it sound as if they are imposing a grind on some- thing structureless. They wind the growing tendrils and Stems around guide strings, so that the growth does not follow the accidents of the non-human environment. They straighten, tie, and tuck. The last line of the first part of the poem smarizes it and makes the symbolic nature of the description explicit: . They trellised the sun; they plotted for more than themselves. A trellis is essentially a grid, a means of imposing order, and to trellis the sun suggests the imposing of a temporal order. The word "plotted" has several possible meanings here. The most literal is a Statement about the selflessness of the three: they worked and planned 67 ("plotted" in an almost conspiratorial way) in greenhouses that they did.not own. This word, like the phrase "trellised the sun," fuses the 'temporal and spatial, for its other possible meanings are that they planned.what the future would bring and that they dug a plot for the florist. The following less literal meanings should also be noted: a grave "plot" and to "plot" graph. The Speaker's reaction to this ordering (perhaps related to the German name "Bauman"--builder)l is ambivalent. On one hand, he Speaks of the women as, These nurses of nobody else . . ., and describes their work as, Keeping creation at east. . . . On the other hand, he likens them to witches, and the description of their bringing of order might recall the line in "Prognosis": The ruminant, reason, chews a poisoned cud. . . . This ambivalence is even clearer when one looks at the sexual undertones in this poem. These begin in the first line where the speaker refers to the "ancient ladies." It continues in his des- cription of their tying and tucking the stiff, jointed stems, like nurses. He says They stood astride pipes, Their Skirts billowing out wide into tents. . . . And then the fine line, with the rich undertones of "teased" and "seed": 1"Bau," in German, means 1) "building, erection, construction; edifice structure; 2) build, frame, form; 3) burrow and den; cultivation, culture, agriculture." These meanings are similar to those of the English word "plot." 68 They teased out the seed that the cold kept asleep. . . . The Speaker's memory of the women's treatment of him obviously links him with the plants: I remember how they picked me up, a Spindly kid, Pinching and poking my thin ribs Till I lay in their laps, laughing, Weak as a whiffet. . . . And then the concluding Six lines, in which the sexual undertones are eSpecially noticeable: Now, when I'm alone and cold in my bed, They still hover over me, These ancient leathery cranes, With their bandannas stiffened with sweat, And their thorn-bitten wrists, And their snuff—laden breath blowing lightly over me in my first sleep. Throughout the poem, one is constantly forced to think of the three women as women, but at the same time reminded that they cannot be objects of desire. The terms "nurse" and "witch" both give the women the air of mysterious attractive power combined with a negative charge. The significance of these women for the Speaker is best seen by com- paring this poem with "Weed Puller." In that piece, the Speaker's "violable" identity was likened to the nameless weeds, and contrasted “to that of the specifically named flowers. In this poem, the women's personal names are given, so we may assume that they in some way represent One or several established identities, possibly the three fates. Their effect on the speaker has been profound and outside of his control. The description of the boy lying in their laps, "laughing / Weak as a Whiffet," unites the two strands mentioned earlier: his pleasure and lack of control. The last six lines continue the notion of his lack 69 (of control. The last six lines continue the notion of his lack of cmntrol, but do not continue the pleasurable portrait of the "crones." The tone of these lines is ambivalent and possibly even negative. In a sense, the women or fates have violated his identity. This is the 'meaning of their ordering, their plotting, and their trellising the sun, and it is also one meaning of the temporal distortion: the Speaker's present cannot be severed from his past. The women shape his present existence and identity just as they shaped the growth of the plants that they "sewed" to the guide strings. The last four poems of the series only once enploy a finite verb. Their most obvious grammatical technique is the use of paratactic chains of absolute constructions, the effect of which is to place the events outside of time. The absolute constructions could be converted into independent clauses by adding was, i§_or will_be_befbre the participles (which are all present participles). "TranSplanting" (_L_S_, p. 19) is in two sections, the first describing human action, the second, the growth of the plants, the first being a cause or condition of the second. The human action is presented entirely in favorable terms, though not the ones distinguished in "Big Wind." Here the qualities emphasized are delicacy and speed. Attention is focused on the action, which is as thoroughly as possible separated from the performer. Possibly this separation is meant to indicate the selflessness of the human character and the universal quality of the action performed. The first line is ambiguous, so that the relation between the Speaker of the poem and the person trans- planting is indefinable: 70 Watching hands transplanting. . . . The Speaker may be watching another person, or "watching" may be an attributive adjective modifying "hands." "Hands" then becomes the subject for the nine present participles in the first section. The last two lines, however, turn attention to the plant itself,1 and it is here that the Single finite verb in these four poems occurs: Into the flat-box it goes, Ready for the long days under the sloped glass. . . . This poem works with the same contrast between freedom and enclosure that "Root Cellar" does. The action of part one, though performed with delicacy and Speed, is still one of burying, tamping, shaking down, and putting in boxes "fer the long days under the Sloped glass." In contrast, part two describes the plants' growth as release: . . . the smallest buds Breaking into nakedness, The blossoms extending Out into the sweet air, The whole flower extending outward, Stretching and reaching. In "Root Cellar," the humanly created environment is cramped and dark, but it is conducive to the growth of obscene roots. In "Transplanting," the humanly created environment is light and open, and the sexual undertones (as in "nakedness") are innocent rather than obscene. "Child on Top of a Greenhouse" (L§, p. 20) is more interesting when read in the light of the preceding poems than when read alone. By itself, it is too sketchy to bring out the full significance of its own lines. It is primarily about the human presence in the greenhouse 1 Possibly the vacillation between describing one plant and several symbolizes the blurring of the distinction between individual and species, obviously contributing to the development of the identity theme. . -\i we IH ‘ - I 71 vworld, but it contrasts the actions of the Speaker, a child, with those (of adults described in other poems. Unlike the "selfless" workers, O O C l ‘the child is showing-off. He is not enduring a difficult time but indulging in a momentary burst of playfulness. The relation, however, Zbetween his "performance" and the inventiveness, delicacy, and swiftness of the adults is not one of mere contrast, but a subtle commentary of each on the other. Perhaps this poem and "The Gentle" in Open House are portraits of the artist as a child, suggesting that the ingeniousness of the artist appears childish and useless to certain kinds of adult eyes. This reading accounts for two other elements of the poem. liere, as in "Moss-Gathering," the Speaker presents himself as a child and lacknowledges his own guilt before "the natural order of things": The half-grown Chrysanthemums staring up like accusers. . ._. (One is reminded of the sense of guilt Hawthorne mentions in the ‘Preface to The House of Seven Gables, where he imagines not the natural order’but his own ancestors disapproving of his being an artist.) The second element is the peculiar nature of the actions mentioned in this poem, which are considerably more violent than those of any other poem in the group, with the exception of "Big Wind." In that poem the violent actions were ascribed to the rose-house and the storm, the two figurative combatants in purposeful.re1ationship with each other. In He may be related to the orchids, though he is certainly not as sinister. 72 "Child on Top of a Greenhouse" each agitation has a different actor, and there is no purposeful accord or opposition among them. The main intention of the poem is to create a sense of the speaker's ability to draw to himself a certain amount of attention from the welter of undirected agitation: The wind billowing out the seat of my britches, My feet crackling splinters of glass and dried putty, The half-grown crysanthemums staring up like accusers, Up through the streaked glass, flashing with sunlight, A few white clouds all rushing eastward, A line of elms plunging and tossing like horses, And everyone, everyone pointing up and shouting! "Flower Dump" (§§, p. 21) returns to the mode of implying human presence. The title itself names a man-made thing, and at the same time begins to set up a tension between the living and the dead. The human presence is implied by four words. The first is "Slag," which of course might refer to volcanic scoria rather than the man-made dress from the smelting process, but in both instances its connotations are coldness,use1essness, and death. "Pile" also does not necessarily indicate human action, though in the line, Whole beds of bloom pitched on a pile, it certainly does. "Twined," in the lines, With bleached veins Twined like fine hair, does not literally name the result of a human action, but figuratively it does. Only human beings twine hair. The last word, "pot," in the line, Each-clump in the shape of a pot, 73 is the clearest of the four, naming as it does an artifact, a product of human workmanship. But what is the significance of this implied human presence? The main intention of the poem answers this question. In the plant world, man, in godlike manner, controls life and death. The adage, "Man proposes; God disposes," provides an interesting insight here. Substitute the "plang," "growth," or "organic processes" fer "man," and "man" for "God," and the meaning of the human presence becomes clearer. Also the word "diSposes," when the rewritten adage is applied to this poem, becomes an illuminating pun. But this relation- ship between man and plant reverberates even more, if it is read as a parallel to the adult-child relationship. The godlike human being (or adult) carelessly disposes of things that are of life-and-death im- portance in the plant world (or child‘s world). The last lines of the poem assert some sort of triumph of life over death, of individual identity over obliteration, and perhaps of the child over the adult: Everything limp But one tulip on top, One swaggering head Over the dying, the newly dead. The last line explicitly describes the jumbling together-the failure to treat with distinction-~the living and the dead. The "swaggering" tulip on top resembles the child on top of the greenhouse, and con- sequently suggests the artist as Opposed to the careless, conventional adult. It is impossible and harmful to limit the significance of the poem to any one of these meanings: they are all present. And it is equally impossible and harmful to resolve the "contradiction" in the Speaker's (child's) attitudes toward adults. Every important relation- ship between human beings, when examined honestly, reveals deep 71! ambivalences within each individual concerned. The Speaker in these poems both admires the adults who work in the greenhouses and hates them, fearing their power over his own potential identity. "Carnations" (§§, p. 22), the last poem in the greenhouse sequence, develOps a new kind of grammatical distortion and thematically presents a temporal distortion. The first two lines may be read as two paratactic independent clauses in the preterite or as two absolute constructions: Pale blossoms, each balanced on a single jointed stem, The leaves curled back in elaborate Corinthian scrolls. . . . Nothing indicates whether "balanced" and "curled" are finite verbs or participles. The remaining five lines do not remove the ambiguity, and the poem stands as a temporal illusion. Looked at one way, it is a description of past action; looked at another, it is present. And the air cool, as if drifting down from wet hemlocks, Or rising out of ferns not far from water, A criSp hyacinthine coolness, Like that clear autumnal weather of eternity, The windless perpetual morning above a September cloud. The last two lines thematically present the temporal dis- tortion, which of course correSponds to the grammatical one. Speaking of the "weather of eternity" is a slight distortion, since weather is usually changeable, and, as defined by The Concise Oxford Dictionary of Current English (1951), is firmly rooted in time and Space: "Atmospheric conditions prevailing at a place and time." The word "autumnal" deepens this distortion, for change is the ssence of seasons and is usually excluded from the conception of unchanging eternity. "Windless perpetual morning" is another of Roethke's beautiful temporal 75 paradoxes, recalling "Fifty summers in motion at once" and "Sailed into morning." The "Greenhouse Poems," then, continue development of the identity theme that began in Open House. Earlier facets, such as the diseased Spirit and the journey inward, disappear to be replaced by new ones, such as the effects of human (parental) care and of the environ- ment on a growing personality. Exploring new imagistic devices, subtle effects of point of view, and the uses of lightly stressed but unmuddied rhythms, these poems justifiably advanced Roethke's reputa- tion. If they have a flaw, it lies in their working too effectively as natural description and in not providing clear enough signs of their symbolic intent. III. Other Short Poems Sections II and III of The Lost Son and Other Poems demonstrates further Roethke's handling of the human presence. The seven poems in Section II deal with human characters, actions, and situations; the five poems in Section III avoid human references almost entirely, allowing only a few hints of the Speaker's humanity. Other, less im- portant, differences between the two groups are as follows: Section II is more sombre, abstract, and remote (that is, the Speaker is a detached observer, though this is not true of "The Return"). Section III celebrates non-human nature and the Speaker‘s sense of union with the "not-'1” e " 76 "My Papa's Waltz" (£§, p. 25) again presents the Speaker as clxild and emphasizes his ambivalent feelings toward his father. The lines, But I hung on like death, and, Still clinging to your shirt, Show the relationship between the two. In Spite of his father's drunkeness, the noise, the smell, and the pain, the boy hangs on. Reducing this poem to the baldest paraphrase, I would say its point is that one's identity is rooted in one's family and that unpleasantness must be accepted. One cannot strike out alone too early, but must receive the support offered, almost regardless of pain and entanglements. The poem recalls the family poems of Open House, especially "The Gentle," and "Weed Puller," "Root Cellar" and "Frau.Bauman, Frau Schmidt, and Frau Schwartze" of the greenhouse series. "Pickle Belt" (§§, p. 26) explores the possibilities of a shifting point of view. The first stanza looks from a remote point at some unidentified factory workers: The fruit rolled by all day. They prayed the cogs would creep; They thought about Saturday pay, And Sunday Sleep. The second stanza narrows to an individual worker and enters his mind; the speaker is inside a boy, looking out: Whatever he smelled was good: The fruit and flesh smells mixed. There beside him she stood,-- And he, perplexed; 77 The boy apparently feels a contrast between his own vivid sensations and the vapid praying and thinking of the other workers. The third line suggests his adolescent over-dramatization. Then the third stanza suddenly places the Speaker at a very remote vantage point, from which he sees the boy not as an individual but as an expendable tool used for the moment by nature for the propagation of the species. He has no identity other than his prickling lust: He, in his shrunken britches, Eyes rimmed with pickle dust, Prickling with all the itches Of Sixteen-year-old lust. "Dolour" (LS, p. 27) presents a picture of the tedium of a life devoid of emotion and imagination, and consequently it comments on the theme of identity. Thoreau exclaims in Walden: "How many a poor immortal soul have I met well nigh crushed and smothered under. . . [the] load [for material possessions]!"1 and H, , .Hen have become the tools of their tools."2 Roethke's poem repeats this same observation, referring to the Endless duplication of lives and objects, and, . . . the duplicate grey standard faces. Roethke, himself, commented on the poems in a talk "On 'Identity'" delivered in 1963. Speaking of Americans' failure of desire for "purity, a final innocence," he said: "Yet we [Americans] continue to 1 Walden: Or, Life in the Woods, ed. Bradford Torrey (Boston, 1897), I, 10-11. 2 Thoreau, I , 61. 78 make a fetish of 'thing-hood,‘ we surround ourselves with junk, ugly objects endlessly repeated in an economy dedicated to waste. [Roethke then quotes the first two and last five lines of "Dolour" and continues] This poem is an exposition of one of the modern hells: the institution that overwhelms the individual man. The 'order,‘ the trivia of the institution, is, in human terms, a disorder, and as such, must be resisted."1 A little later in this same piece Roethke admits that "All this has been said before, in Thoreau, in Rilke."2 "Double Feature" (LS, p. 28) works with the sudden shift in vision, much as "Pickle Belt" does, though here the view point remains inside the first-person Speaker. The "I" sees the last moment of a serialized motion picture "thriller," then the house lights come on, and the speaker leaves the theater. Throughout this development there is perhaps a slight opposition suggested between the excitement of the hero's adventure and the speaker's boring life: I dawdle with groups near the rickety pop-corn stand; Dally at Shop windows, etc. But the third, and last, stanza suddenly reveals a deeper vision of the Speaker's: "I notice. . . the slow" Wheel of the stars, the Great Bear glittering colder than snow, And remember there was something else I was haping for. The unSpecified "something else" is the second "feature"; the morass of "thing-hood," represented by the tawdry theater and the stupified audience, contrasts with this. In his talk "On 'Identity'," Roethke l Poet and Craft, pp. 19-20. 2 Poet and Craft, p. 21. 79 spoke of "a real hunger for a reality more than the immediate: a desire not only for a finality, for a consciousness beyond the mundane, but a desire for quietude, a desire for joy."1 Again Roethke is very close to Thoreau. "The Return" (§§3 p. 29) introduces the figure of "all haunted and harried men,"2 which is to occupy Roethke's mind throughout the poems of the late 19u0's and early 1950's. This figure is foreshadowed in earlier poems, such as "Feud" and "Prognosis ," and in "Greenhouse Poems," such as "Root Cellar," "Weed Puller" and "Frau Bauman, Frau Schmidt, and Frau Schwartze," In this poem the Speaker likens himself to a beast being hunted down that has returned to its lair, knowing it will be found. Two interesting qualities of the poem are the subtle balance between the human and bestial characteristics of the Speaker, and, secondly, the way in which the poem strongly but indirectly suggests the question, why has he returned to this unpleasant place? I circled on leather paws In the darkening corridor, Crouched closer to the floor, Then bristled like a dog. As I turned for a backward look, The muscles in one thigh Sagged like a frightened lip. A cold key let me in That selfeinfected lair; And I lay down with my life, With the rags and rotting clothes, With a stump of scraggy fang Bared for a hunter's boot. 1 Poet and Craft, p. 19. 2 Poet and Craft, p. 10. 80 The balance of human and bestial needs no explanation other than the drawing of attention to the Speaker's self-disgust. The poem implies that he is being hunted down by dogs fellowing his scent, and he pictures himself as a furtive and cowardly animal, not as a noble stag or lion. Why has he returned to this "self-infected lair"? Not because it protects or hides him, for he expects the "hunter's boot" at any moment. The answer lies in the child's ambivalent attitude toward its parents and its home. The Speaker's returning to his "lair" resembles the boy's clinging "like death" to his father's shirt in "My Father's Waltz." More abstractly, this represents the difficulty of an individual's finding or making his identity. Regardless of the un- pleasantness of one's early environment (even if it was a "root cellar") and of the faults of one's parents, if one is to develop an individual identity it must be rooted in these. When he wrote these lines, Roethke may have been remembering another poem about animals, in which the poet accepts the unpleasantness that reality ferces on him, Yeat's "The Circus Animals' Desertion": Nowthat my ladder's gone, I must lie down where all the ladders start1 In the feul rag-and-bone Shep of the heart. The next poem, "Last Words" (§§, p. 30), returns to the contrast between excitement and tedium dealt with in "Double Feature" and "Dolour." The first six lines convey the sense both of being encumbered 1The Collected Poems of W. B. Yeats (New York, 1957), p. 336. Professor Roy Harvey Pearce instructs usIflt'. . to use. . .[Roethke's poem] as a means of defining our own return to the mental hOSpitals—- if such are meant here--which we perforce make out of our lives," "The Power of Sympathy," Stein, p. 171. I believe this reading is possible and fruitful. M—s 81 by objects and of the adolescent vagueness and self-consciousness of the Speaker's longing for something beyond That fine fuming stink of particular kettles. . . . The Speaker's selfemockery grows sharper in the absurd exclamations: O worm of duty! 0 Spiral knowledge! The second section continues in this vein: Kiss me, kiss me quick, mistress of lost wisdom, Come out of a cloud, angel with several faces, Bring me my hat, my umbrella and rubbers, Enshroud me in Light! 0 Whirling! O Terrible Love! The strange invocation begins with a scrap of child's verse and moves into a parody of Blake, but the last line fails to sustain this parody, and in my opinion the poem is unsuccessful. The last poem of section II, "Judge Not" (LS, p. 31), also fails either through inconsistency or obscurity. The Speaker assumes the role, previously assigned to the greenhouse workers and adults, of arbiter of life and death; however, his bases of judgment are not clear. Perhaps, as the title suggests, one human being is never clear sighted enough to pass such judgments on other human beings. In the first section, the Speaker is "haunted by images," which means he is not confronting others directly. This detached observer (or dreamer) calls down "the blessings of life": Faces greying faster than loam-crumbs on a harrow; Children, their bellies swollen like blown-up paper bags, Their’eyes, rich as plumbs, staring from newSprint,-- These images haunted me noon and midnight. 82 I imagined the unborn, starving in wombs, curling; I asked: May the blessings of life, 0 Lord, descend descend on the living. But in the second section, he is not "haunted by images," not looking at newSpaper photographs, not "imagining the unborn," but seeing human degradation and suffering at first-hand: Yet when I heard the drunkards howling, Smelled the carrion at the entrances, Saw women, their eyelids like little rags, I said: On all these, Death, with gentleness, come down. One explanation of this last line is that the speaker has seen the destruction of human identities and feels the volnerability of his own, and therefore calls down Death on the "lost souls." The five poems of Section III, in contrast to the preceding ones, do not deal with human figures other than the Speaker. The first of these poems, "Night Crow" (LS, p. 35), in a sense presents a spatial distcution. An experience that takes place in the external spatial world is translated into an "inner" event that conveys a sense of a great spatial capacity in the Speaker's mind. This duality of inner and outer resembles the traditional mystic doctrine of correspondence. When I saw that clumsy crow Flap from a wasted tree, A shape in the mind rose up: Over the gulfs of dream 'Flew a tremendous bird Further and further away Into a moonless black, Deep in the brain, far back. This poems achieves its effect through its own inexplicableness much the same way Stevens' "Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird" does. Not much in the poem offers grounds for eXplanation, beyond the fact ‘that the "clumsy" and familiar crow in the external world evokes or'correSponds to a terrifying image in the mind. 83 "River Incident" (SS, p. 36) similarly treats the subject of the bonds between the speaker-observer and non-human nature. A shall arched under my toes, Stirred up a whirl of Silt That riffled around my knees. Whatever I owed to time Sowed in my human form; Sea water stood in my veins, The elements I kept warm Crumbled and floated away, And I knew I had been there before, In that cold, granitic slime, In the dark, in the rolling water. The ambiguity of "arched" is an example of Spatial distortion. Ordinarily, that word would describe the shape of a shell, not the Shell's motion; but here an arching motion is meant, Since it is this movement that stirs up "a whirl of silt." The Speaker then feels the similarity between his own life in time and the slowing of the silt's movement and its settling after the agitation subsides. This perception itself translates the spatial into the temporal. And again this translation accompanies a breaking down of the distinction between the individual and the species, or, more accurately, between an individual man and the life process itself. The speaker feels that he has evolved out of the Sline and that he retains his bond with it. Clearly implying ‘metempsychosis, the last lines provide an early statement of what is to become a major theme in Roethke's work, one I Shall call the theme of "reincarnation." "The Minimal" (SS, p. 37) works with the same correspondence between the human and non-human worlds, but in a subtler and more suggestive way than the preceding two poems. It, too, emphasizes the Speaker's role as observer, the foundation of the poem being the at: single independent clause: "I study the lives. . ., the sleepers, etc. . . ." The correspondence is stated in terms of the two worlds the Speaker studies, first the fauna living in a bog, secondly, bacteria in wounds on human beings. The correSpondences between a hog and a wound, and between both of these and the human unconscious, become important in "The Lost Son" and the poems that follow it. I quote the poem in full: I study the lives on a leaf: the little Sleepers, numb nudgers in cold dimensions, Beetles in caves, newts, stone-deaf fishes, Lice tethered to long limp subterranean weeds, Squirmers in bogs, And bacterial creepers Wriggling through wounds Like elvers in ponds, Their wan mouths kissing the warm sutures, Cleaning and caressing, Creeping and healing. The bog and the wound are not merely identical, of course. The one is cold and supports life forms that are somehow trapped ("in caves" and "tethered") or deadened ("sleepers," "numb" and "stone-deaf"). The other is warm and conducive to benevolent life forms ("kissing," "cleaning," "caressing" and "healing"). The significance of these differences seems to be that the bog ferces life to struggle and evolve, (resembling "Forcing House"), and consequently gives rise to greater and greater degrees of individuality. Life in the human wound, like life for the foetus in the womb, is a deceptive repose, one that lulls life away from the painful struggle toward individuality and consciousness. Taken alone, this poem cannot perhaps support such a reading, but read in light of "The Lost Son" it can. Even if the bacteria are "cleaning and healing," the connotations of "wan" and of the 85 picture of them as young eels are decidedly pejorative. "The Cycle" (SS, p. 38) describes the water cycle in terms that suggest it represents the life cycle or, as in traditional neoplatonic symbolism, the journey of an immortal soul into, through, and out of, the mortal state. The salient details are: The fine rain coiled in a cloud, which brings to mind the serpent in the Garden of Eden, symbolizing the immediate cause of the fall into moral existence. The climaz of the poem is reached in the line: The air grew loose and loud, conceivably suggesting the wrath of God. And, finally, the weighted word "lapsing" in the line: Tunnelled with lapsing sound. . . . The Fall of man is called the "lapse." Such details, though, are meagre evidence for this reading, and the poem must be charged with the same fault of many of Roethke's early pieces--insufficient develop- ment, lack of symbolic depth. The last poem in section III, "The Waking" (SS, pp. 39-u0), is quite clear in itself and is an appropriate introduction to "The Lost Son." It, too, presents the spea;er as observer of non-human nature and records his awareness of his relationships with it. The main intention of the poem is to convey the Speaker's ecstasy in discovering that he is not isolated, not shut out from the non-human world: I wan't alone In a grove of apples. 86 The last four lines touch on the reincarnation theme already noted in "River Incident":l And all the waters Of all the streams Sang in my veins That summer day. Mr. Burke justly describes the poem when he says that it "risks a simple Post--Wordsworthian account of pure qu,"2 The short lyrics in Sections I through III maintain an objective form, being organized legically, chronologically, or spatially. With the poems of Section IV, Roethke begins a series of pieces exhibiting radical experiments in form, ones that were to incur the frequently repeated charge of "fallacy of imitative form." He published four poems of this group in The Lost Son, then expanded it to fourteen in Praise to the End! (1951). Although these poems deal with themes introduced in the earlier works, they explore them much more fully. At this point in his career, what Roethke needed to do most was to write long poems that would allow him to develop at length themes and patterns of images. Fortunately, that is just what he did. 1 Here a more accurate term fer the theme would be "pantheism," but as I Show in the next chapter the two themes are closely allied. 2 Burke, p. 86. CHAPTER FOUR THE SHAME OF CIRCULARITY The series of long narratives published under the title Praise to the End! begins with an attitude prevalent in Roethke's earlier work--1ife in time is painful. By the end of the sequence, however, the protagonist has conquered his weltschmerz and learned to make certain affirmations, albeit sometimes in a shrill voice. Most important to his spiritual progress is facing down the Specter of death, and the discovery that enables him to do this is a com- tination of doctrines: pantheism, Darwinian evolution, transmigration of the soul, and mysticism. A passage in Yvor Winters's essay "The Experimental School in American Poetry," although not dealing with Roethke, brings together several of the important themes in these poems and relates them to another, the journey inward or introspection: The Emersonian and allied doctrines differ in their moral implications very little from any form of Quietism or even from the more respectable and Catholic forms of mysticism. If we add to the doctrine the belief in pantheism--that is, the belief that the Over-Soul is the Universe, that body and soul are one--we have the basis for the more or less Freudian mysticism of the surrealists . . .; we have also-~probab1y--a rough notion of Hart Crane's mysticism. . . .The pantheistic mystic . . . is more interested in the promptings of the "subconscious" mind than of the conscious, in the half-graSped intention, in the fleeting relationship, than in that which is wholly understood. He is interested in getting just as far off in the direction of the uncoltrolled, the meaningless, as he can possibly get and still have the pleasure of talking about it. He is frequently more interested in the psychology of sleeping than in the psychology of waking; he would if he could devote himself to exploring that realm of experience which he shares with sea-anemones, cabbages, and onions, in preference to exploring the realm shared Specifically with men. 1 In Defense of Reason (New York, 1997), pp. 55-56. 87 88 This may stand as a more than adequate though brief summary of the ideas underlying these poems. Although Winters neglects to eXplain the relation between pantheism and receptivity to subconscious stirrings, both are certainly relevant to these narratives. More important than pantheism, however, is the theme of reincarnation or metempsychosis. The title of this chapter, in fact, alludes to an occurrence of this theme in "I Cry, Love! Love!," where the protagonist asks: Is circularity such a shame? "Circularity" refers to the doctrine that souls return to earth until they have perfected themselves. If Roethke, as it appears, accepted this doctrine in order to allay an unbearable fear of death, he (or his protagonist) closely resembles Whitman. Leslie Fiedler, without referring to metempsychosis, observes this similarity: "He [Roethke] can never cease to travel the road to Woodlawn, for him the archetypal cemetery, but thinking of it he asserts his ego with Special passion. . . . Nowhere else does he remind us so strongly of Whitman, of 'Song of Myself.”1 Frederick William Conner has pointed out that Whitman's attitude toward (he does not say "fear of") death led him to a belief in evolution and transmigration of the soul.2 Beyond Whitman, one cannot locate with certainty the other sources for these ideas in Roethke's poems. Conner rapidly sketches what might be a geneology of Roethke's themes, beginning with the 1 Waiting for the End (New York, 196%), p. 228. 2 . . . . . Cosmic Optimism (Ga1nesv1lle, Florida, 19u9), pp. 111-116. 89 evolutionary form of reincarnation seen in the Pythagorean ". . .idea of the cyclical transmigration of soul. . . ." He then leaps over Plato and Plotinus to the English poet James Thomson and his ". . . conception of the ascent of the soul through a rising series of incarnations, [which] foreshadowed an interpretation of evolution that was to have great appeal for several of our poets. Readers of Emerson and.Whitman will be aware that Emerson's 'worm striving to be man' mounted through all the Spires of form, and that Whitman described evolution as the 'long journey' of his own soul."2 And, we may add, Theodore Roethke saw his father's face "deep in the belly of a thing to be" (2!, p. 107) and affirmed that: "By snails, by leaps of frog, I came here, Spirit," (HE, p. 101). Returning to the Winters passage, we see that it comments not only on several themes but also on what Winters considers an objection- able mode of composition. In a statement on Roethke's poetic technique, Leslie Fiedler provides an illuminating counterbalance to Winters's declamation against surrealism: Particularly strong in his [Roethke's] work are evidences or surrealism, which elsewhere our tradition so strongly resists. [Fiedler continues in the next paragraph:] Eliot and Pound themselves . . . as well as Crane and Cummings (and Poe befbre them all), have been finally too involved with culture to make the final plunge into the abyss of the unconscious; their madhouses are inhabited by the ghosts of books rather than those of unconfessed or unfulfilled desires. Roethke, on the other hand, has been willing, in his flight from the platitude of meaning, not only to work on the very edge of psychic disaster, but also to seek in the absolute privacy of his own dreams, 3 rather than in the decaying culture, his ultimate images and myths. Conner, p. 9. 2Conner, p. 10 3 Fiedler, pp. 226-227. 90 The crucial difference between the Fiedler and the Winters passages, in so far as the both comment on the artistic employment of the unconscious, is that Winters regards a verbal "raid of the inarticulate" as a betrayal of the intelligence to nonsense, whereas Fiedler regards it as a rejuvenation of language. Since several of Roethke's early poems reveal a marked distrust of reason, he obviously would not share Winters's judgment. Roethke, of course, may be allowed to Speak for himself on the matter of his technique and philos0phy of composition. Writing admiringly of the work of Louise Bogan, he furnishes some insight into his own conception of the creative process: "One definition of a serious lyric-~it may come from Stanley Kunitz--would call it a revelation of a tragie personality. [And, then, more of our immediate pointz] Behind the Bogan poems is a woman . . . who never writes a serious poem until there is a genuine 'up-welling' from the unconscious; who shapes emotion into an inevitable-seeming, an endurable, form."l Of course, writing out of such an "up—welling" when it is consciously understood and shaped is not practising surrealism. And, indeed, in his "Open Letter," where he explains more fully what he is about, Roethke does not sound like a surrealist. The first comment I quote picks up the idea of tragedy which we just saw as part of the definition of a serious lyric: "To keep the rhythms, the language 'right," i.e., consistent with what a child would say or at least to create the 'as if' 1 Poet and Craft, p. luO. 91 of the child's world, was very difficult technically. I don't believe anyone else has been foiish enough to attempt a tragedy in this particular way."1 In other words, Roethke apparently feels there is a "tragic 1>ersonality" standing beyond these poems. Whether it is his own or the protagonist's, it is one that has known a beautiful and innocent world and seen that world invaded by death, sexuality, and self-loathing. But to return to the problem of technique, Roethke writes a length: A word or two about the habits of mind or technical effects peculiar to this sequence. ("Peculiar" is not used in the sense of odd, for they are traditional poems. Their ancestors: German and English folk literature, particularly Mother Goose; Elizabethan and Jacobean drama, especially the songs and rants; the Bible; Blake and Traherne; Durer.) Much of the action is implied or, particularly in the case of erotic experience, rendered obliquely. The revelation of the identity of the Speaker may itself be a part of the drama; or, in some instances, in a dream sequence, his identity may merge with someone else's, or be deliberately blurred. Rhythmically, it's the Spring and rush of the child I'm after-- Gammer Gurton's concision: mutterkin's wisdom. . . . I believe that, in this kind of poem, the poet, in order to be true to what is most universal in himself, Should not rely on allusion; should not comment or employ many judgment words; Should not meditate (or maunder). He must scorn being "mysterious" or loosely oracular, but be willing to face up to genuine mystery. . . . He must be able to telescope image and symbol, if necessary, without relying on the obvious connectives: to speak in a kind of psychic shorthand when his protagonist is under great stress. . . . If intensity has compressed the language so it seems, on early reading, obscure, this obscurity should break open suddenly for the serious reader who can hear the language: the "meaning" itself should come as a dramatic revelation, an excitement. The clues will be scattered richly--as life scatters them; the symbols ill mean that they usually mean-~and sometimes something more. 1 Poet and Craft, pp. u1-u2. 2 Poet and Craft,_pp. 91-82. 92 Where Knock Is Open Wide (PE, pp. 15-18) The title of the first poem of the sequence, "Where Knock IS Open Wide," is taken from Christopher Smart's "Song to David," and the poem itself also has, as Mills points out, resemblances to Dylan Thomas's "Before I Knocked."l Mills says of the poem that it "seems to use the line from Smart to imply birth and entry into the world."2 Professor Roy Harvey Pearce, commenting on the poem and title, agrees: ". . . This is an entrance-into-the-world poem. For the child, cause and effect are not 'rationally' related--thus it is the 1nock, not the door, which Opens wide on this eXperience. . . ."3 Contrary to these opinions, it seems to me that the poem treats ex- periences that occur several months after the birth of the protagonist. The title well describes what Doctor Sandor Ferenczi has called the "period of magical-hallucinatory omnipotence." Doctor Ferenczi describes the infant's wish to return to the ". . . untroubled existence in the warm, tranquil body of the mother," and then adds that normal care for the child fulfils these wishes as soon as they form. He continues: "Since the child certainly has no knowledge of the real concatenation of cause and effect, or of the nurse's existence and activity, he must feel himself in the possession of a magical capacity that can actually reaize all his wishes by simply imagining the satisfaction of them."” 1 Theodore Roethke (Minneapolis, 1963), p. 18. 2Mills, p. 18. 3 Stein, p. 181. “"Stages in the Development of the Sense of Reality," Sex in PsychoanalySis, trans, Ernest Jones (Dover Publications, Inc; New York, 1956), pp. 188-89. 93 This passage resembles the comment by Professor Pearce, but I would say that the poem itself treats the gradual departure from this "period of magical-hallucinatory omnipotence" rather than the entrance into it. Hilton Kramer rightly says ". . . the 'events' of the poems are perceptions and memories in which parental love and the security of home I O I O O l are jeOpardized or in some moment of crrsrs." Of the five numbered sections, of the poem, the first three are similar in tone and reproduce the thought processes of a very young child. Section IV presents the remembered experience of a fishing trip that the protagonist, perhaps at age four or five, took with his father. The last section Shows us the child's mind shortly ; after his father's death. Mills describes accurately the develOpment in this poem and the technique used throughout“the two sequences of long poems: Since our point of observation is located within the protagonist's mind, though not at the level of reason or calculation, certain external facts such as his changing age are not always easily deterndned, We gather, however, that the poems extend over a period from early childhood into late adolescence. . . . The present poem ranges from the first years of life with their scraps of nonsense verse and nursery songs, through a brief section touching on the small boy's religious emotions, then his fishing trip, and ending with the initial signs of anxiety and guilt which accompany the feeling of desolation caused by the father's death. The narrative progression of the poems, if we may thus Speak of it, depends upon Roethke's concern for the advances and setbacks of the evolving Spirit. The most important structural principle of the poem is that Sections IV and V repeat the action that informs the first three .1"The Poetry of Theodore Roethke," Western Review, XVIII (Winter 195a), 135. Hereafter cited as Kramer. 2 Theodore Roethke, pp. 19-20. 9'! sections. In both instances the action is implied, not narrated explicitly.1 This action is that of being lifted up, eSpecially that of being lifted out of confinement or danger into protection. In the first three sections, the infant is playing alone in his crib until he is lifted up by an adult; in Section IV, the boy falls into the water*while fishing and is lifted out by his father. The main move- ment of the poem is away from the early sense of omnipotence into the realization that he will never again be lifted from above. There are what might be called two main sources of action in the poem, the protagonist's definition of his identity and the "disappearance" of objects and beings. The Speaker defines his identity by recognizing, identifying with, and eventually pitying, other entities. He is also dimly aware that eating and giving;birth (or being the offspring of another person) influence the individual's identity. The action of "disappearance" occurs in three constellations of images, two of which are varieties of containment, one of these threatening, the other protecting, and the third is a group of repetitive, unreasoned actions. The protective strand, expressed in the line "Fish me out," might be called the "save" group,2 for it includes all manner of saving: release from harm, escape from threat, ..reCOgnition (saving in the mind). These are disappearances in the sense that something (perhaps just a memory image, as in the case of recognition) is taken from one state to be preserved in another, and lRoethke says of the poems discussed in "Open Letter": "Much of the action is implied or, particularly in the case of erotic ex- perience, rendered obliquely," Poet and Craft, p. #1. I use verbs as names for these image-clusters because all the clusters picture action or change of state or condition. 95 they emphasize the Speaker's awareness of mutability. The threatening <:onste11ation of disappearances may be called the "lose" group, for it includes all forms of ending, dying, falling, injuring, capturing, departing, sleeping, and imprisoning, each of which in a way represents disappearance. The third constellation may be called the "repeat" group, and includes sleeping, playing, singing, not caring, and pitying--all forms of the protagonist's reaction to loss. These three constellations are not mutually exclusive. For example, recognition is both a way in which the Speaker defines his identity and a form of "saving." Sleep is both a disappearance (especially when someone other than the protagonist sleeps) and a reaction to loss (when the Speaker does it himself). But let me turn to the I1 poem itself. The opening lines read: A kitten can Bite with his feet; Papa andmamma Have more teeth. Sit and play Under the rocker Until the cows All have puppies. These lines do more than merely picture innocence, as Denis Donoghue believes.2 They tell us that papa, mamma, and the kitten are potential sources of pain. The Speaker's reaction to this knowledge is withdrawal, but even his hiding place, "under the rocker," is not a safe one, though he has not yet learned that. The transferming of "until the cows all 1Where my explication is fairly lengthy, I shall number the sections of my commentary to correspond to the numbered sections of the poem under discussion. 2"Roethke's Broken Music," Stein, p. 1H7. 96 come home" does not simply tell us, as Donoghue says, that during play, time passes swiftly.1 Rather, it indicates that in his quest for identity, the protagonist wishes to ignore the important link between parents and offspring. His feelings toward "Papa and Mama" are highly ambivalent. His ears haven't time. Sing me a Sleep-song, please. A real hurt is soft. The first of these lines, whatever it refers to, is an expression of the protagonist's sense of being rejected. As in the preceding quatrains, his reaction is withdrawal, this time into Sleep rather than play. Song, sleep, and play thus group themselves into a cluster of withdrawal. The third line suggests that the child is still in a protected state, that the "pains" that he is suffering now as he awakens from his "period of magical-hallucinatory omnipotence" are only the slightest hints of the pains in store for him. Once upon a tree I came across a time, It wasn't ever as A ghoulie in a dream. These lines perhaps echo Dylan Thomas's variation upon the same formula, "And once below a time. . . ," in "Fern Hill." The first line may allude to the crucifixion, a notion reinforced by "a-cross." In the last lines of Thomas's "Before I Knocked," the body of Christ refers to the godhood of Christ as He lStein, p. 1u7. 2In Totem and Tabu Freud Speaks of the child's desire to sever the ancestral linkage. 97 Who took my flesh and bone for armour And doublecrossed my mother's womb. Roethke's protagonist perhaps feels that §g_has been doublecrossed by his mother's womb. In any case, this quatrain tells of his discovery of time. The last two lines say that at this point of time, the devourer, had not yet taken on his ghoulish aspect. The "hurts" were "soft," and time meant nothing more unpleasant than bedtime. There was a mooly man Who had a rubber hat And funnier than that,-- He kept it in a can. The "mooly man" is associated with the "ghoulie" by sound and by the fact that both are relatively non-threatening foreshadowings of later terrors. What is the significance of the mooly man's keeping his hat in a can? We see here the beginning of the separation between the two kinds of containment, the womb (or heaven) and the grave (or hell). The hat is a protective container, which, Since it is rubber, can swell like the womb. "I Need, I Need," a later poem in this sequence, tells us that "A hat is a house," and the last lines of "Where Knock IS Open Wide" are: Maybe God has a house. But not here. In other words, God's house is not here (It is lost) because it is imprisoned (contained) in the grave, the mooly man's can. This is a direct contradiction of one of Plotinus's definitions of God: "The Source, having no prior, cannot be contained by any other form of being; It is orbed around all; possessing, but not possessed, holding all, Itself nowhere held." Later, continuing the imagery of container and 98 contained, Plotinus defines his position regarding the competing doctrines of materialism and idealism, the struggle between which forms the thematic core of Roethke's narratives: "Soul is not in the universe, on the contrary, the universe is in Soul; bodily substance is not a place to Soul; Soul is contained in Divine Mind and is the container of body."1 Roethke's lines, then, are the child's sugar-coated perception that the grave devours the womb, foreshadowing the child's later fall into the knowledge that he is just a highly evolved piece of matter. What's the time, papa-seed? Everything has been twice. My father is a fish. In light of the undercurrent of meaning in the preceding quatrains, the first of these three lines is an aggressive taunting. The child seems to be mockingly taking the role of the Preacher in Ecclesiastes, Speaking with the wisdom of babes and telling his father that there is a time for birth and a time for death, as if he has already "fallen" into knowledge and can now Speak with the sophisticated ennui of Solomon. The second line is a variation on: "The thing that hath been, it is that which shall be; and that which is done is that 2 which shall be done: and there is no new thing under the sun. . . ." l The Essence of Plotinus, ed. Grace H. Turnbull (New York, 19u8), p. 166, Ennead v.v.9. I have chosen to use this edition because it is much clearer than the standard edition, by Stephen MacKenna, on which it is based. B.S. Page, who published a revised edition of MacKenna's Plotinus, says in his bibliography that Miss Turnbull "often departs in detail from MacKenna and sometimes with a gain in accuracy" (Plotinus, The Enneads, trans. Stephen MacKenna, 2nd ed. [New York, 1956], p. 627). Hereafter cited as Plotinus. 2Ecclesiastes II:9. 99 One easily sees here the crack in the pessimism through which the protagonist will escape into his belief in reincarnation. The last line of the three quoted from Roethke returns to the child's feeling of rejection; his father is a cold fish, one who fertilizes the egg vithout feeling fer mate or offspring. Suggestions of the theme of evolutionary transmigration also lurk in this line. II I sing a small sing, My uncle's away, He's gone for always, I don't care either. I know who's got him, They'll jump on his belly, He won't be an angel, I don't care either. These two quatrains, the beginning of Section II, are an important foreshadowing of the events in Sections III and IV. The child's uncle, a father-figure, has apparently died, but the reaction to loss here is more mature than in Section I. Although the Singing still represents a withdrawal, it is coupled not with Sleep but with a self- assertive pretense to lack of concern. We can see in "He's gone for always" a continuation of his discovery of time. "Who's got him" is probably the mooly man. The jumping on his belly goes back to the imprisoned womb image of the rubber hat kept in a can. I know her noise. Her neck has kittens. I'll make a hole for her. In the fire. 100 These lines continue the aggressive tone and suggest attack rather than withdrawal. The woman seems to be a noisy one whom the child associates with pain, the kitten who bites with his feet, perhaps his mother. The "hole" he plans to make resembles the mooly man's can, a grave image. The fire is probably hellfire or eternal pain. In any case, he is going to make her disappear. Winkie will yellow I sang. Her eyes went kissing away It was and it wasn't her there I sang I sang all day. After blithely condemning the woman to the fire, he continues his song of not-caring, which she had interrupted. He smugly notes her demonstration of affection, but also notes her departure (which he would see as a rejection). He then indicates his ambivalent feelings for her by making her a duplicitous creature of his own phantasy. III I know it's an owl. He's making it darker. Eat where you're at. I'm not a mouse. Some stones are still warm. I like soft paws. Maybe I'm lost, Or asleep. If Section II ends with the protagonist crooning to himself in a lilt that hides his deeper feelings of pain, Section III begins with a breakdown of this defense. The short, disconnected sentences convey anxiety and distraction, while the accumulating images suggest that the child is in bed, playing under the covers: it is dark; he denies he is a mouse, even though he has gone into his hole; it is warm; he is aware of the presence of his own body; and he has "disappeared," being either lost of asleep. He does not know whether his present "disappearance" 101 is comfortable or frightening. A worm has a mouth. Who keeps me last? Fish me out. Please. He seems to decide that his "disappearance" is of the threatening kind, in other words, that he is buried. The worm reminds one of the "ghoulie," who in Section I was associated with burial. The word "keeps" harks back to the mooly man, who keeps his hat in a can. The child wonders whether the worm's mouth will "keep" him last or whether someone will fish him out, resurrect him. Both "worm" and "fish" foreshadow the events of Section IV. The last line is a simple prayer. God, give me a near. I hear flowers. A ghost can't whistle. I know! I know! Hello happy hands. In these lines there is a quickening to a climax. The prayer continues. The protagonist, imagining his burial, hears flowers growing above him. When he is actually buried he will not be able to whistle to himself in the dark, that is, comfort himself as he now does with singing, playing, and sleeping. "I know! I know!" seems to be an "O Altitudo!" He affirms his faith. The last line returns suddenly to the child in the crib; someone has come to lift him up. The first three sections treat not only protective and threatening containment and the protagonist's reactions to these, but also his attempts to define his identity. These attempts take the forms of statements of fact, recognitions, and story-making, and are related to his brief role as a pseudo-Solomon. Much of the material 102 material in Section I represents knowledge that the child has acquired (and Slight distortions of this). He has heard bedtime songs and in Section II he begins singing them fer himself. The lines, Once upon a tree I came across a time . . . and, My father is a fish, and perhaps even the mooly-man quatrain, are his attempts at story- making. He closely resembles Stephen Dedalus at the opening oflg Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man, who also tries his hand at early Singing: Once upon a time and a very good time it was there was a moocow coming down along the road met a nicens little boy named baby tuckoo. . . . His father told him that stoty: his father looked at him through a glass: he had a hairy face. He was baby tuckoo. The moocow came down the road where Betty Byrne lived: she sold lemon platt. O, the wild rose blossoms On the little green_place. He sang that song. That was his song. 9, the green wothe botheth. When you wet the bed first it is warm then it gets cold. His mother put on the oilsheet._ That had the queer smell.l The development from listening to songs to singing them parallels the child's changing reaction to loss (or pain). In Section I he hides, 1 (New York, 1969), p. 7. 103 asks for a song, plays, and sleeps, but in II he sings, flaunts his "don't-care" attitude, and, at least in his mind, takes action against the noisy woman.' IV In Section IV the protagonist is a boy of four or five, going on a fishing trip with he father. The action is related in the past tense, apparently looking back from a point in time after the father's death.1 The first verse paragraph describes a frog escaping from a bird's beak. The boy then describes his pity fer a fish that they have aught and his prevailing upon his father to throw the fish back. This action marks a significant step in the definition of his identity. He no longer hides or turns to phantasy when he encounters pain, but acts purposively. He identifies himself with the gasping fish; both of them are "trying to talk." Two early Greek statements relating to Pythagoras's life and teachings are relevant here. The first is in the writings of Diogenes Laertius, who recounts a story from XenOphanesz "ONce they say that he [Pythagoras] was passing by when a puppy was teing shipped, and he took pity and said: 'Stop, do not beat it; for it is the soul of a friend that I rec0gnized when I heard it giving tongue.'"2 Interestingly enough, the notion that Pythagoras taught the doctrine of the transmigration of souls rests mainly on the anecdote. 1 Leslie Fiedler writes: "In Roethke's verse. . . father and mother are dead before the poetry begins; and it is against the looming threat of annihilation, the prescience of the death that cut him off just as he was attaining full rec0gnition, that ht asserts the frail 'I' which the cult of objectivity would have him disavow," Waitingfifor the End, p. 228. 2The Presocratic Philosophers, ed. G. S. Kirk and J. E. Raven (Cambridge, England, 1957), p. 22. 104 But, another statement, by Porphyrius, is also especially relevant when we recall the protagonist's earlier words, "My father is a fish." Porphyrius summarized Pythagoras's teachings as follows: "None the less the following became universally known: first, that he maintains that the soul is immortal; next, that it changes into other kinds of living things; also that events recur in certain cycles, and that nothing is ever absolutely new; and finally, that all living things Should be regarded as akin. Pythagoras seems to have been the first to bring these beliefs into Greece."1 Whether or “Ot Roethke found his ideas in the presocratics,2 every one mentioned by Porphyrius appears in these poems. In the present context, the protagonist continues to associate his father with a fish: Bullheads have whiskers. And they bite. Here is a momentary hostility to the father, who, we will remember, also "bites." But immediately the other Side of his ambivalence asserts itself and he recalls his father's gentleness: He watered the roses. His thumb had a rainbow. The stems said, Thank you. Dark came early. The significance of these lines is obvious, the last line hinting at the approach of death. An abrupt change of tone follows: 1 Kirk and Raven, p. 223. 2 In "The Pure Fury" (EH, p. 158) he mentiones Parmenides. 105 That was before. I fell! I fell! The worm has moved away. My tears are tired. Nowhere is out. I saw the cold. Went to visit the wind. Where the birds die. How high is have? Keeping the background action of the fishing trip in mind, we may say that these lines tell of the boy falling into the water. He cries and struggles. He feels that "Nowhere is out" of the water; . l he 13 overwhelmed. Then, after he is lifted out, he feels the cold wind. "How high is have" perhaps refers to this being lifted. This literal meaning is distorted by the symbolic weight that the Speaker himself Eels as he recalls the events. The symbolic action is the confrontation of death, the fall into eXperience, where "experience" esSentially means knowledge of death. I'll be a bite. You be a wink. Sing the snake to sleep. These lines, revealing the child's self-assertion in the face of something he does not fully understand, are a variation upon: "I'll be the cops; you be the robbers." In a sense, they are a regression to the period of magical-hallucinatory omnipotence, eSpecially if he believes that this game will Sing the snake to sleep. V. Section V amplifies the meaning of the protagonist's fall: he falls from Childhood's innocence when his father dies and he also falls 1 . . . . Either Blake, a certain ancestor of this poem, or Heraclitus, Plato, or Plotinus could suggest to Roethke water as a symbol for materiality and a fall into water as a symbol for the descent of the soul into the body, a type of death. 106 from faith. The first two lines tell the father to return and they also inform the father that affection returns (like bread cast upon the waters): Kisses come back, I said to Papa. . . . The third quatrain relates the fall to the child's definition of his identity: I'm somebody else now. Don't tell my hands. Have I come to always? Not yet. One father is enough. The father's death changes the speaker's place in the family, the isecond line indicating that ht is unready to take on the new rSSponsibilities. He realizes that he has not suddenly reached a place beyond which there is no change, a heaven. The last line seems to be a denial of God's existence, perhaps growing out of the boy's bitterness. The poem ends with two lines that bring together his fall, the contrast between protective and imprisoning containment, and loss: Maybe God has a house. But not here. I Need, I Need (PE, pp. 21-23) If "Where Knock IS Open Wide" develOps the contrast between benevolent and hostile containment, "I Need, I Need" fecuses attention on the opening of the container (or the gate between two conditions or places), and on the movements into and out of that opening. Like the preceding poem, this one reveals the Speaker's ambivalence, here 107 eSpecially seen in actions of expulsion and intromission. He both needs and rejects his shadowy companion. This poem transforms the loss theme of "Where Knock IS Open Wide" by stating it in an aggressive imperative: "Get lost!" But like the preceding poem, "I Need, I Need" depicts a maturing of the speaker, so that by the end of the poem his aggression has harmonized with his love. When Roethke read this poem over the BBC network in July of 1953, She introduced it with this comment: ". . . 'I Need, I Need' opens with very oral imagery, the child's world of sucking and licking. Then there is a Shift to a passage in which two children are jumping rcpe. The reader isn't Eglg the children are jumping rope: he simply hears the two reciting, alternatively, jingles to each other; then this mingled longing and aggressiveness changes, in the next passage, to a vaguely felt, but definite, feeling of love in one of the children."1 If Roethke had extended his remarks, he might have mentioned some other "oral images" that contrast with sucking and licking, such as sneezing and spitting, and he might have related this contrast to the difference between emotional need (love) and rejection (hatred). Section I shows the protagonist, "a little boy who is very sad,"2 wandering listlessly and thinking about his absent mother. She is associated in his mind with various receptacles, such as "a deep dish," a mouth, a Spoon, a cellar, a hat, and a house. The connotations of l . . "An American Poet Introduces Himself and hlS Poems," Poet and Craft , p. 10. 2 Roethke, "Some Remarks on Rhythm," Poet and Craft, p. 75. 108 tend to be favorable and protective, but threatening undertones are evoked by notions of devouring, eSpecially in the lines: Do the dead bite? Mama, she's a sad fat. The implication here is that the boy sees his mother as an intended victim of the dead; he foresees her death. The concept of taking in (intromission or introjection) is mainly benevolent and associated with the mother; the action of expelling is for the most part hostile and associated with phallic images. The following lines present these two clusters: Hoo. I know the Spoon. Sit in my mouth. A sneeze can't Sleep. Sneezing is an act of expulsion, though here it is not associated with a phallic image (except perhaps the sppon). Went down cellar, Tdked to a faucet; The drippy water Had nothing to say. Assuming the faucet is a phallic image, one can see in these lines the boy's feeling that he has been rejected by the father who has died. Scratched the wind with a stick. The leaves liked it. This image, like a later one, "A pick likes to hit ice," says that the active agent (not the passive) is the one that feels the pleasure. The aggressiveness that is to appear in Section II is foreshadowed in the word "begonia," which might be a pun on "Be gone, you!" This is, of course, the "Get lost!" theme. 109 In Section II the boy is no longer alone, but, as Roethke describes it, exchanging rather hostile rope-skipping jingles with a companion. The songs are obliquely concerned with the theme of identity, particularly as identity is related to knowledge (experience) and to the need / rejection complex. I believe the first voice (the unindented lines) is that of the companion, the more aggressive of the two. The line, I haven't time for sugar, suggests no time for kindness and alludes to the biting-devouring actions. The next two lines, Put your finger in your face, And there will be a booger, combine phallic and receptacle images and the actions of intromission and expulsion, althoughthis last action is merely implied. If there were hints of sexual curiosity in "Where Knock IS Open Wide," then these lines may represent a sort of covert bragging about his knowledge on the part of the companion. The jingle sung by the voice that I assume to be the protagonist's lacks hostility: A one is a two is I know what you is: You're not very nice,-- So touch my toes twice. The playing on numbers here not only implies the rope-skipping action, but also goes back to the notion of compulsive repetition that was introduced in the line, Everything has happened twice, in "Where Knock Is Open Wide." This may be a symptom of the boy's 110 lack of will and aggressiveness.l The second line maintains that he knows the companion's identity. The- companion replies by defining the protagonist's identity in terms of his own: I know you are my nemesis So bibble where the pebble is.2 The trouble is with No and Yes As you can see I guess I guess. But these lines are less aggressive than his first ones and also suggest the difficulties of decisive action. The protagonist then sings of his wishes for an identity. The companion, perhaps with an impulse of friendliness, says that both of them are lowly and not very knowledgeable, but an undercurrent of meaning in his words reminds the 1>rotagonist that he is a "lost son." He reSponds with a burst of hostility: Not you I need. Go play with your nose. Stay in the sun, Snake-eyes. The first line explicitly states one of the poem's major themes, and the second echoes the companion's earlier‘words. The protagonist has learned from his "friend" to eXpress hatred. In Section III, the protagonist once more admits his emotional need, perhaps with the tenderness of self-pity. As at the end of the second section, he is aware of his lostness, of his separation from the father ("a heard in a cloud"). Perhaps he even knows that if he is to Or, it may allude to the Pythagorean idea of recurrence. 2 In "The Pbre Fury" (SE, p. 158), we find the line: "Great Boehme rooted all in Yes and No." 111 be reunited with his father he must die: The ground cried my name. . . . But in these lines he is saddened, not angered, by his feeling of being lost. The protagonist's search for his identity appears in Section III in the lines: Can I have my heart back? and, The ground cried my name. Section IV shows the boy trying to construct an identity by copying the memory of his dead father. He is planting and cultivating. The imagery is phallic and aggressive, but interestingly the boy overtly denies that he is following his father: When you plant, spit in the pot. A pick likes to hit ice. And, My hoe eats like a goat. The lines picture both expulsion (rejection) and intromission (need), and in a sense ambivalently present an intermingling of creative and destructive acts.1 An undercurrent of meaning, which comes to the surface in, It's a dear life I can touch, conveys the fact that the boy does not fear or hate things that are present. The source of his pain is the feeling that he has been rejected by his dead father, who must be seen in contrast with "a dear life I can touch." 1And as such, they possibly represent coitus. 112 Following this, a brief, concluding passage seems to show the protagonist years later, leading a girl through a gate and into a field. The significance of these lines is that he is entering another condition, probably the realm of romantic love. The devouring theme is present here, carrying suggestiong of the devourer becoming one substance with the devoured. The implication is that the protagonist is about to be consumed by love. Bring the Day! (PE, pp. 27-28) Both "Where Knock Is Open Wide" and "I Need, I Need" treated the theme of identity in terms of the protagonist's acquiring knowledge and of his ability to act with purpose (saving the fish and cultivating plants). "Bring the Day!" fOcuseS attention on the problem of purposive action. The Opposing poles Of the poem may be termed "to begin" and "not to begin." The implied action is a conversation between the protagonist and a woman, taking place at sunrise. They are outdoors, possibly in the field that was entered at the end of "I Need, I Need." The change that we see the protagonist undergo in this poem is from dislike for the coming Of day to celebration of daybreak. Section I reveals the protagonist's tense concern with permission and with he own capability. The bees and lilies of the Opening lines Suggest the male and female lovers, reSpectively. Bees and lilies there were, Bees and lilies there were, Either to other,-- Which would you rather? Bees and lilies there were. 113 These lines introduce the Speaker's indecisiveness and his desire for consent. The second verse paragraph shows that both the lovers want the consent of nature. The Oddly worded lines, She asked her skin To let me in, emphasize this need for consent. The third verse paragraph marks a decided turn in the develop- ment. In psychological terms, one could say it presents the extreme tension between the conscience, the ambition to behave in an ideal manner, and the lawless impulses that the mind refuses to recognize in itself. We can imagine the woman reminding her lover that there should be a Spiritual commitment: Forever is easy, she said. And he replies that "forever" might be easy fOr angels, but How many angels do you know?-- He then recalls that his ancestry can be traced back to the primovdial Slime, to algae: And over by Algy's Something came by me, It wasn't a goose, It wasn't a poodle. The stagnant pond (Algy's) not only symbolizes the origin of life, but also the unconscious mind. The "something" not recognized or named represents either a repressed wish or self-disgust. Whatever it is, it is not tame and attractive like a goose or a poodle. The remaining two verse paragraphs continue this sense Of selfedisgust and give it more apparent sexual implications. The sun 11” is rising and the Speaker is in a state of heightened sensitivity. He feels the closeness of things, the quiet preceding the dawn, and his own incapacity. The line, I can't marry the dirt, perhaps means that he feels the force of the woman's words; he knows that he must "struggle out of the slime."1 But the beauty of the woman or of the sunrise "melts" him, which suggests a loss Of identity. The "white weather" is the daylight, and it "hates" him in that it reveals him to himself and he is filled with self-disgust. Why is how I like it. He prefers Speculating about the "why" Of things to acting, to defining himself. Rallying himself out of the deSpondency that he has just approached, the Speaker reappraises his relationship to the rest of nature. Perhaps his own sense of his inadequacy drives him to a curious examination Of all nature's processes. The first verse paragraph Of Section II shows the Speaker questioning what appears to be the breeding Of the herrings. It also Shows his curiosity about the relation between the animate and the inanimate. Since the inanimate wind makes the inanimate grass Speak, perhaps the whispers and singing in the waves, between the herrings, is just another voice of the inanimate. In other words, perhaps life is just a complex development Of the inanimate and nothing more; perhaps everything that exists lies between the water 1 Poet and Craft, p. 37. 115 and the rock. In the second verse paragraph, the Speaker identifies himself with a tree, and then immediately expresses his need for affection, a need which may be seen as the thing that sets him apart from the tree. But then he goes on to point out that various forms Of life need, in a sense, the care of the inanimate, and that they in turn love it: When I stand, I'm almost a tree. Leaves, do you like me any? A swan needs a pond. The worm and the rose Both love Rain. Ralph Mills makes a sensitive comment on the third section Of this poem when he says that it ". . . Shows the emergent self in the image of a tiny bird waking to existence, feeling a little its own possibilities, and facing a life that has cast Off its ties with the past and only looks forward."1 The analogous situation, as Mills correctly sees, is the expulsion of Adam and Eve from the Garden. In psychological germs, the point described is that between adolescence and adulthood. These lines Of celebration for the "Spirit's progress" are not without a note Of resignation and wistfulness, but the poem ends on a clearly affirmative note: It's time to begin! To begin! Give Way, 0 Ye Gates (PE, pp. 31-33) This poem expands upon the line, When I stand, I'm almost a tree, 1Theodore Roethke, p. 23. 116 from the preceding poem. Here the Speaker iS.a tree and the implied actions are things experienced by the tree. The title suggests that the protagonist considers himself as a sort Of battering ram, attempting to break through into a higher realm of life. The notion Of rein- carnation that one finds in this poem and the explanation for the Speaker's being a tree are, again, possibly supplied by the writings of Plotinus, an eSpecially relevant passage being: "Those that have lived wholly to sense become animals; according to the particular temper Of life, ferocious or gluttonous animals. Those who in their pleasures have not even lived by sensation, but have gone their way in a torpid grossness, become mere growing things, for this lethargy is the entire act Of the vegetative, and such men have been busy betreeing n1 themselves. The term "torpid grossness" might well describe the particular self-disgust felt by the protagonist at various points in the preceding poems. Although the protagonist likens himself to a tree, he asserts himself more frequently than in earlier poems, and the sense of inadequacy seen in "Bring the day!" is replaced by confidence, expressed in lines scattered throughout the poem: Believe me . . . i 5.0.1151 love.a.duck. Bring me a finger. I couh melt down a stone. . . . Make me a bird or a bear! 1 Plotinus, p. 89, Ennead III.iv.2. 117 These are only a few of the commands and assertions that reveal the protagonist's state of mind. But unlike the preceding poems, this one develOps from an affirmative position to a negative one; the Speaker's soul is drawn deeper into the world of the body, possibly to be seen as a reaffirmation of Roethke's early condemnation of the faculty of human volition. Section I shows the protagonist to be confident of where he is and of where he is going. He knows the facts of his situation: he, himself, is a theater for life and he is an observer in this theater, not a performer. He hints that he has been seduced into his present in- faturation with the life of his body: Such music in a skin! A bird sings in the bush of your bones. And, "You . . ." Twiced me nicely,-— In the green of my sleep, In the green. In this section the Speaker seems to be addressing a cat that is climbing through his branches. (The cat, a predator, a carnivore, later becomes a symbol for the body.) The Speaker addresses first the sun ("Mother of blue and the many changes of hay") and then another tree. Both verse paragraphs reveal assertiveness and confidence, though also suggesting a further sinking into the life of the body. Bravado is mingled with a small 1>oy's sexual curiosity: I could melt down a stone ,-- How is it with the long birds? May I look too, loved eye? 118 The first of these lines shows the Speaker assuming for himself the powers of the being he is addressing, the sun. The second and third, I take as suggestions of sexual curiosity. The address to the other tree sounds strangely apocalyptic: We'll swinge the instant!-- With jots and jogs and cinders on the floor. The sea will be there, the great squashy shadows, Biting themselves perhaps;‘ The shrillest frogs; And the ghost of some great howl Dead in a wall. The speaker's confidence even protects him from fearing this time of tribulation, for he thinks that he will remain just an onlooker. Perhaps there is an allusion here to the book of Revelation: "And there came out of the smoke locusts upon the earth: and unto them was given power, as the scorpions of the earth have power. And it was commanded them that they should not hurt the grass of the earth, neither any green thing, neither any tree; but only those men which have not the seal of God in their foreheads," (ix.u). The "shrillest frogs" might allude to the verse: "And I saw three unclean Spirits like frogs come out of the mouth of the dragon, and out of the mouth of the beast, and out of the mouth of the false prOphet," (Rev xvi.13). After describing the time of tribulation the Speaker describes a time of joy: In the high-noon of thighs, In the Springtime of stones, We'll stretch with the great stems. We'll be at the business of what might be Looking toward what we are. 119 Despite his being a tree, the Speaker‘swords carry clear erotic undertones. The last lines promise self-discovery and perhaps suggest procreation and the circularity of transmigration. Section III clearly introduces the theme of reincarnation: You child with a beast's heart, Make me a bird or a bear! He is not ready for human reSponsibility, but he does wish to be more than a tree. But now the instant ages, And my thought hurts another.body. I'm sad with the little owls. The protagonist is sad because he is dissatisfied with himself, with his lot. Baudelaire's poem "Les Hiboux" clarifies these lines. Its last two stanzas read: Leur attitude au sage enseigne Qu'il faut on ce monde qu'il craigne Le tumulte et le mouvement; L'homme ivre d'une ombre qui passe Porte toujours le chatiment D'avoir voulu changer de place. The protagonist may be sad with the owls, but he is not as content as ‘they are. Baudelaire's owls are creatures of the night that do not chase shadows, but the protagonist in Roethke's poem has been deluded by a phantasy. The imagery of Section IV reminds one of Plato's Myth of the Cave. The speaker's unrealistic picture of the joys of bestial life 1 Oeuvres Completes dg_Charles Baudelaire, ed. Jacques Crepet, VOl. I (Paris, 1930), p. 132. 120 gives way to a painful awareness of what it means to be alive in the world of particulars, in the world of flux: Touch and arouse. Suck and sob. Curse and mourn. It's a cold scrape in a low place. The dead crow dries on a pole. Shapes in the shade Watch. In "I Cry, Love! Love!" Roethke calls this awareness the "anguish of concreteness." The "cold scrape in a low place" certainly suggests the interior of a cave, and the three following lines remind one of the "shapes" who carry objects before a fire so that these objects will case shadows on the wall in front of the imprisoned men.1 The three concluding verse paragraphs continue to draw upon platonic and neoplatonic imagery: These wings are from the wrong nest. Who stands in a hole Never spills. I hear the clap of an old wind. The cold knows when to come. What beats in me I still bear. The deep stream remembers: Once I was a pond. What slides away Provides. The significance of these lines becomes clear when one compares them with the following passage from The Enneads: "In the Intellectual [realm] they [the forms] remain with the soul entire and are immune from care and trouble; but there comes a stage at which they descend from the universal to become partial and self-centered. This state long maintained, the soul is a deserter from the All; it is a partial thing, isolated, weakened, full of 1None of the commentators has mentioned.what seems to me a surprisingly prof0und influence of Plato on Roethke. I am aware of only one explicit reference to the philosoPher, in "The Pure Fury" (E3, p. 158): "At times my darling squeaks in pure Plato." 121 care, intent upon the fragment; severed from the whole, it nestles in one form of being, caring only for the one, for a thing buffeted about by the world full of things. With this comes what is known as the casting of the wings, the enchaining in body. . . . It has fallen, it operates through sense, it is a captive. This is the burial, the encavernment of the soul. The "nestling" mentioned by Plotinus may explain the gnomic lines: Who stands in a hole Never spills. Beneath their apparent absurdity, these lines express the attitude of a "careful" creature who has intently fixed his mind upon one thing, who has fOrsaken everything in order to preserve one fragment. The lines, What beats in me I still bear, call to mind the Phaedrus, where Socrates is explaining the growth of the soul's wing, ". . . which being shut up within company with the emotion [desire], throbbing as with the pulsations of an artery, pricks the aperture which is nearest, until at length the entire soul is pierced and maddened and pained, and at the recollection of beauty is again delighted."2 The last verse paragraph attempts to accept the flux and to relate it to the dimly remembered life in the realm of intellectual forms, the word "provides" suggesting physical sustenance and glimpses of the eternal forms: 1 Plotinus, pp. ins-ug, Ennead IV.viii.u. 2 The Dialogues of Plato, trans. B. Jowett, 3rd ed., Vol. I (London, 18927, p. 255. Hereafter cited as Plato. 122 The deep stream remembers: Once I was a pond. What slides away Provides. Sensibility! 0 La! (EE, pp. 37-38) This poem eXplores further the relationship between the spiritual and the physical, the word "sensibility" referring to both :realms. The immaterial world is represented in the poem by the wind and sun, along with references to ghosts and witches. The physical is represented by woods, grass, and the moon. The protagonist confronts a woman and Speaks of the effect her beauty has on him. Instead of inducing him to remember his former life in the world of forms, it reminds him of the necessity of his own and his beloved's death.1 He struggles to become more conscious, to see the unchanging world, but the "progress" is painful and he feels the pull of the particular. In the end he gives up the effort and assumes the mixed attitude of one who loudly affirms his belief in "higher things" while at the same time saying "0 la!" The poem is strongly influenced by the writings of Heraclitus. The first line, I'm the serpent of somebody else, is a variation on that philoSOpher's statement: "Gods are mortals, men are immortals, each living the others' death and dying in the others' life,"2 This is an idea that Yeats made much of in his work. Roethke's The protagonist in a sense reacts identically with a person described in the Phaedrus: "Now he who is not newly initiated or who has become corrupted, does not easily rise out of this world to the sight of true beauty in the other; he looks only at her earthly namesake, and instead of being awed at the sight of her, he is given over to pleasure, and like a.brutish beast he rushes on to enjoy and.beget; he consorts with wantonness, and is not ashamed or afraid of pursuing pleasure in violation of nature," (Plato, p. 255). 2 Selections from Early Greek Philosophy, ed. Milton C. Nahm 123 Speaker refers to a woman who reponses like a lake. His desire to "seize" her betrays his aoquisitiveness (what Plato calls the "brutish" reaction to beauty), his enslavement to things: See, She's sleeping like a lake. Glory to seize, I say. Singing the praises of the woman's beauty, the protagonist, in the second verse paragraph, blames her for his fall. He pictures her much the way Botticelli does Venus in The Birth of Venus, except that her birth is considerably lower. In fact, if we may see this "goddess" as a symbol for spirituality, the protagonist seems to be telling her that she has Sprung out of the material realm, returning us to the themes of idealism and materialism: In the fair night of some dim brain, Thou wert marmorean-born. I name thee: wench of things, A true zephyr-haunted woodie. The sea's unequal lengths announced thy birth From a shell harder than horn. Thy soft albino gaze Spoke to my Spirit. Perhaps she is a newly created goodess, Sensibility, and is born in the physical brain, not the mind. The marble, shell; and horn stress her tangibility. Her "soft gaze" seduces the Speaker and he enters her world of "things." The woods is "haunted" by a "zephyr," obviously a line meant to recall the ancient association of breath and wind with the soul. The section ends with the protagonist's predictions of things in come, similar to those in Section II of the preceding poem. His foresight this time intimates mortality. (New York, 19u7), p. 92. Fragment no. 67. This fragment does not appear in Kirk and Raven. 12“ Section II is as disjointed as it is brief. The protagonist contin ues in the exhibitionistic tone with which the preceding part concluded, the essential function of the lines being to tie together imagistically the speaker's pre-emptory attitude toward the woman, his attachment to "thing-hood"l and his awareness of mortality. This section is linked to the preceding by several lines that treat the paradox that what is in flux is boring and what is permanent (the forms) is truly interesting: Some rare new tedium's taking shape. . . . And, in Section II: A shape comes to stay: The long flesh. The phallic image, "the long flesh," would seem permanent only to one thoroughly deluded by the Shadows in the cave. The final section deve10ps this concern with distinguishing what "abides" from what flows. As the protagonist's consciousness of death grows, he more earnestly desires to affirm the existence of the Spiritual world. The "zephyr" is tranSfOMed: You all-of—a-sudden gods, There's a ghost loose in the long grass! He then mentions some movements that, if he wished, he could attribute to purely physical causes. After this he briefly explores the significance of an ill-smelling wind as a symbol for the fusion of lRoethke used this term in a statement titled "On 'Identity'" made in 1963: "Yet we continue to make a fetish of 'thing-hood,‘ we surround ourselves with junk, ugly objects endlessly repeated in an economy dedicated to waste," (Poet and Craft, pp. 19-20). 125 spirituality and mortality, a Symbol foreshadowed in part one by the line, "I smell the jumps ahead." He Speaks to the "prince of stinks" about his exaltation, his belief in an afterlife, the prince of stinks being either death or Satan, the Prince of the Air. But he does not know exactly how to enter that other world, how to leave the world of materiality; once more he is the lost son: It's a long way to somewhere else. This acknowledgement is followed by the only honest thinking that the grotagonist does in this peom, and he approaches a breakthrough, but in the last three lines his effort fails. The passage runs as follows: The shade says: love the sun. I have. La, la, The light turns. The moon still abides. I hear you, alien of the moon. Is the sun under my arm? My sleep deceives me. Has the dark a door? I'm somewhere else,-- I insist! I-am. The sun symbolizes the unchanging world of forms or Spirituality, the moon, the ever-changing physical world. The protagonist is saying that he loves the light because he fears the darkness. He then adopts the position of Heraclitus: change is the only thing that abides (fragment 83). Perhaps all lovers of the sun are nothing more than "aliens of the moon." Thinking this, he imagines briefly that he has completely understood the mysteries of spirituality, perpetuating in this way the mood of "seizing" with which the poem Opened. But actually he is in a state of hallucination, and only in that state has he traveled the "long way to somewhere else," remaining all the while 126 imprisoned in the cave. o Lull Me, Lull Me (33, pp. u1-u2) In this poem the protagonist considers his own thinking processes, which we have seen attempting to work in "Sensibility! 0 La!" Developing a contrast between the pain of thinking and the pleasure of dreaming, he again moves into an affirmation, but one that is more honest than that concluding the preceding poem. "0 Lull Me, Lull Me" particularly examines the nature of dreaming, setting in opposition torpor and dreamlike images of love-making. Section I contrasts motionless dreaming ("Blessed be torpor") with thinking ("Tell me, great lords of sting, / Is it time to think?"), the protagonist clearly preferring the first. Section II begins with a celebration of the dream world, a land of cockaigne where " . . . the air provides" and where Light fattens the rock. But this song ends as the speaker becomes aware that to fulfill one wish, that of "seizing" the woman, he must exert himself: I'm crazed and graceless, A winter-leaping frog. A "winter-leaping frog," of course, does not exist; a frog passes the winter in a state of torpor. Overcoming his need to be "soothed" and his excuses for his torpor ("I'm still waiting for a foot"), the protagonist promises the woman that for her he will move: 127 . . . I can't go leaping alone. For you, my pond, Rocking with small fish, I'm an otter with only one nose. . . . This is an image of love-making. The line, I'm more than when I was born,-- indicates that the protagonist does not wish to consider sexuality a fall, a degradation. The line, in fact, reverses the idea of Plotinus's on which Wordsworth wrote his famous ode. Roethke's Speaker sides rather with the Speaker of Dylan Thomas's poem, "Before I Knocked", who says: I who was rich was made the richer By sipping at the wine of days.1 Roethke's poem ends on this note of affirmation of the world of materiality and procreation. The Lost Son (PE) pp. 47-53) "The Lost Son," the best of the fourteen narratives, begins with the protagonist at a point of Spiritual low-ebb. After mentioning another such "relapse" in these narratives, Roethke explained that ". . . the method is cyclic. . . . There is a perpetual slipping-back, then a going-forward. . . ."2 Owing to this "slipping-back," a number of the poems have roughly the same structure, a fact noted by many of the commentators. Professor Louis Martz, for instance, describes this 1 . . The Collected Poems of Dylan Thomas, Augmented Edition (New York, 1957), p. 9. 2 Poet and Craft, p. 39. 128 common line of development as follows: . . . Each poem opens with a flight from ordinary "reality" into the irrational, the animal, the realm of the fish, the rat, the mouse, the cat, the eel, the otter, the mole; there are many implications of a return to the womb: "I feel the slime of a wet nest." These primitive images are given in a mode of flickering, sometimes ranting, incoherence, simulating the breakup of established modes of consciousness. Then, out of all this apparent disarray of being, there arises the strict, clear, calm imagery of that greenhopse Eden: warmth, power, growth, movement toward the light. . ... Most of those who have written on the narratives do not go any further into detail than does Professor Martz, but even in his sketchy outline I believe there are several inaccuracies. In the "Open Letter," which he wrote for John Ciardi's Mid: Century American Poets in 1950, Roethke commented at length on the development in "The Lost Son." Since there is some disagreement about the action of the poem, and since understanding the action depends upon understanding the first section of the poem, let me begin by quoting Roethke's remarks on Section I, "The Flight": ["The Lost Son"]. . . is the "easiest" of the longer ones [the narratives], I think, because it follows a narrative line indicated by the titles of the first four sections: "The Flight," "The Pit," "The Gibber," "The Return." "The Flight" is just what it says it is: a terrified running away--with alternate periods of hallucinatory waiting (the voices, etc.); the protagonist so geared-up, so over—alive that he is hunting, like a primitive, for some anamistic suggestion, some clue to existence from the sub- human. These he sees and yet does not see: they are almost tail- flicks, from another world, seen out of the corner of the eye. 1"A Greenhouse Eden," Stein, pp. 31-32. For similar descriptions of this line of deveIOpment see: Louis BOgan, "Verse," The New Yorker, 15 May l9u8) p. 118. Babett Deutsch, Poetry in Our Time (New York, 1965), p. 197. Hilton Kramer, "The Poetry of Theodore Roethke," Western Review, XVIII (Winter, 1954), 13n-135. Carroll Arnett, "Minimal to Maximal: Theodore Roethke's Dialectic," CE) XVIII (May, 1957), ulu-uls. M. L. Rosentha1,'CloSing in on the Self," The Nation, 21 March 1959, p. 259. R. J. Mills, Jr., "Theodore Roethke: the Lyric of the Self," Poets in Progress, ed. Edward Hungerfbrd (Evanston, 1962), pp. 12-13. Kenneth Burke, "The Vegetal Radicalism of Theodore Roethke," LVIII (January 1950), 86. 129 In a sense he goes in and out of rationality; he hangs in the balance between the human and the animal. This is a very helpful gloss, but it leaves many difficult questions unanswered. Perhaps the most important of these are: "What is the protagonist fleeing, and.where is he going?" Carroll Arnett and M. L. Rosenthal give two quite different answers to each of these. Arnett writes of "The Flight" that it ". . . is a nightmarish waiting fOr birth, an ambivalent invocation ('Snail, snail, glister me forward, / Bird, soft-sigh me home') and an avoidance of consciousness ('You will find no comfort here, / In the kingdom of'bang and blab')."2 After discussing "The Lost Son," Arnett generalizes about the themes and the usual line of develOpment found in Roethke's first three volumes: "His themes are the struggle which the Spirit makes to release itself from the terrors, as well as the psychic salvation, of the unconscious world of slime and womb, so that it may enter into the understanding and moral responsibility which the conscious 'kingdom of bang and blab' requires as prerequisites to any truly creative growth in the world of history."3 I agree that Roethke is concerned with the Spirit's attempts to ". . . release itself from . . . terrors, . . ." especially the terror of death. And I agree that he associates the unconscious mind with "Slime and [the] womb." But I believe that Arnett is trying to make Roethke over into a more socially conscious poet than he actually is. The result of this distortion is a neglect of the metaphysical questioning l Poet and Craft, p. 38. 2"Minimal to Maximal: Theodore Roethke's Dialectic," CE, XVIII, ulS. 3 Arnett, ulS. 130 that so importantly informs most of Roethke's poetry. Rosenthal, on the other hand, charges Roethke with the very irresponsibility from which Arnett was so anxious to exonerate him. After quotingirom "Open Letter," Rosenthal writes: So be it--this panicy hunt for the pre-intellectual sources of the sense of being truly alive is without doubt one of the real, if uneasy, enterprises of the modern mind. But the poet is not ruthless enough to carry the hunt through--any more than he was able to remain true to the realizations at the beginning of "The Shape of the Fire." He finds another clue to salvation, an easier one, than the frenzied beginning would imply possible. It is the "lost son's" psychological re-entry into the world of the most vivid childhood memories-~the world of the "long greenhouse" which he has called "my symbol for the whole of life, a womb, a heaven-on-earth." Re-entry into this paradisal womb, one gathers, is the necessary preliminary for a rebirth of the Self. The true "coming-through" into mature, calm reconciliation has not yet occurred, but faith is expressed that it will do so-- A lively understandable spirit Once entertained you. It will come again. The promise it too pat and.wishful--of a Freudian romance with a happy ending. As in most of Roethke's longer work, the denouement does not live up to the poem's initial demands. Rosenthal considers the ". . . re-entry into . . . [the] womb . . ." a regression necessary to Spiritual advancement, but for an unexplained reason considers it an "easy" way. In saying, this, he touches upon a difficult aspect of the poem--the cause of the protagonist's eventual progress. Although Rosenthal recognizes the metaphysical level of the poem, he misreads, in my opinion, the return to the greenhouse. Ralph Milss correctly sees the importance of the setting in the poem, but misses the metaphysical significance of it by sticking too closely to the literal level: ". . . This initial section . . . treats the confused and often tormented condition of the child-protagonist as he 1 "Closing in on the Self," The Nation (1959), p. 259. 131 tries to learn the direction he must take to escape those forces working solely for his anguish or destruction."1 The protagonist is not in immediate danger of "destruction," and is fleeing rather the awareness <>f his own inevitable death than a present threat itself. William Meredith comes close to making this point when he writes: "It is not an easy poem, yet the obscurity is that of a lucid dream, where only the causes and connections, not the facts or events, are in doubt. The causes seem to be the death of parents, the Speaker's recognition of his aloneness, sealed off in his link of the chain of human life, and the loss of childhood and its illusion of order."2 One can make a fairly gpod case for saying that in part the child's flight is caused by the death of one or both of his parents. But the case must necessarily rest on details in other poems in the series, eSpecially ones in "Where Knock is Open Wide," not on those in "The Lost Son" alone. To understand properly both the cause of the protagonist's flight and the meaning of his return to the greenhouse, one must not be misled by a desire to peer into the child's mind, but must examine the imagery and the changes of scene. I feel that the key to this poem lies in the images of contain- ment or enclosure, both threatening and protective, and in the change from threatening containment to protective. The scene changes from Woodlawn Cemetery, with such images of imprisonment as crypts and wells, to a pit, to a frost-covered greenhouse in the night, to the transparent 1 . Theodore Roethke ("University of Minnesota Pamphlets on American Writers," No. 30 [Minneapolis, 1963]), p. 2n. Hereafter cited as Theodore Roethke . 2"A Steady Storm of Correspondences, Theodore Roethke's Long Journey Out of the Self," Stein, p. B2. 132 greenhouse in the warm sunlight, to an Open field. Most of the images in this poem belong to this cluster, which I shall call "the grave- nest cluster," borrowing from two lines in one of the later narratives, "Unfold! UnfoldI": What the grave says, Tne nest denies. (3E) p. 83) A second important group of images in the poem are those pertaining to motion and stasis. These occur as images of motion, images of stasis, and as images of motion-in-rest, combining the two. The fusion of the two is usually described as a "swaying" and relates to the imagery of dancing, which becomes important in Roethke's later poems. In those poems the dance symbolizes an ideal attitude toward life, one that achieves a mean between rejection and enslavement. In the present poem, however, I do not think the imagery of motion-in-rest has reached that point of development. Roethke has said that "The Flight" is ". . . a terrified running away--with alternate periods of hallucinatory waiting (the voices, etc.) ."1 He refers in these words to the uncombined and perverted forms of motion and stasis, which, instead of fusing, producing an equilibrium, as they do in Section V, replace each other violently and ineffectively. The waiting is associated with images of threatening containment and stagnation. One sees images of imprisonment in the opening lines: At Woodlawn I heard the dead cry: I was lulled by the Slamming of iron, A slow drip over stones, Toads brooding in wells. 1 Poet and Craft, p. 38. 133 The ". . . Slamming of iron . . ." describes the closing of a crypt, and the "well" Similarly belongs to the grave-nest cluster. (I Shall say more of this mage later.) In the second verse paragraph occurs one of the most important grave-nest images, that of the stagnant pond: Fished in an old wound, The soft pond of repose; Nothing nibbled my line, Not even the minnows came. Roethke had made this imagistic connection between a wound and a pond earlier in The Lost Son: Squirmers in bogs, And bacterial creepers Wriggling through wounds Like elvers in ponds. . . . ("The Minimal," LE) p. 37.) Both in "The Minimal" and in "The Lost Son" the pond-wound symbolizes the unconscious mind2 and a place where the line between animate and inanimate becomes indistinct. That the image symbolizes the un— conscious is partly suggested by the juxtaposition of "The Minimal" and "Night Crow" (on consecutive pages in The Lost Son), since "Night Crow" explicitly transforms an external event into a mental one. This symbolization is further substantiated by a statement that Roethke makes in "Open Letter" while describing the act of writing a poem: 1 W. W. Skeat's Etymological Dictionary_states that "ME pond [is] a variant of pound, an enclosure; it means a pool formed by damming up water. . . ." 2Stanley Kunitz, in reviewing The Lost Son, writes: "Suddenly we are under ground, under water; in a grave, in a womb, in the deep ponds of the subconscious. . .," ("News of the Root" Poetry, LXXIII [January 1999], 223). 13H ". . . Let's say you fish, patiently, in that dark pond, the unconscious, or dive in, with or without pants on, to come up festooned with dead cats, weeds, tin cans, and other fascinating debris. . . .”1 If the pond in the poem resembles the unconscious in which the poet fishes, the boy in the poem resembles the poet in that both wish to escape something painful or threatening. In "Open Letter" Roethke speaks of the ". . . miseries and agitations which one has been permitted to escape by the act of creation itself." But the boy does not fish "patiently," as the poet does. He is ". . . geared-up . . . and over- alive. . . ." He ". . . sees and yet does not see. . . ."3 This description of the boy differs at almost every point from Roethke's description in the "Open Letter" of the ideal reader (who one may assume closely resembles the patient poet-fisherman): ". . . You will have no trouble if you approach these poems as a child would, naively, u with your whole being awake, your faculties loose and alert." The five consecutive four-line stanzas with end—stepped lines, the suppression of the grammatical subject (e.g., "Fished in an old wound"), the shift from indicative to imperative voice, the rhythms, and the abrupt changes in setting--all indicate that the protagonist is in a state of anxiety. 1Poet and Craft, p. 37. 2 Poet and Craft, p. 36. 3 Poet and Craft, p. 38. u Poet and Craft, p. 37. 135 The inefficacy of the Speaker's hallucinatory waiting grows clear in the lines: Sat in an empty house Watching shadows crawl, Scratching. There was one fly. The "empty house" is the last clear grave-nest image in Section I. Following this the Speaker expands upon the pond-wound image, but adds no new ones to the cluster. In the Speaker's invocation to "the voices" (part of the "hallucinatory waiting"), one finds a variation of the image of the crawling shadows. That image and the variation serve to introduce later descriptions of motion: Voice, come out of the Silence. Say something. Appear in the form of a Spider Or a moth beating the curtain. The Speaker's willingness to accept a Spider or moth as a Sign, as an aid in his flight, implies anxiety. Two passages treat "the voices" and other assistance that the Speaker attempts to acquire. In the first verse paragraph, he turns to several of the lower forms of life: I shook the softening chalk of my bones, Saying, Snail, snail, glister me forward, Bird, soft-sigh me home. Worm, be with me. The verbs in the requests addressed to the snail and bird express the speaker's readiness to move as they do. In a sense, he is seeking to learn something by identifying himself with other creatures. Later in Section I, when he turns to inanimate nature for aid, something Similar occurs 3 136 Tell me: Which is the way I take; Out of what door do I go, Where and to whom? Dark hollows said, lee to the wind, The moon said, back of an eel, The salt said, look by the sea, Your tears are not enough praise, You will find no comfort here, In the kingdom of bang and blab. The first of these verse paragraphs refers to the container imagery (the "empty house") and sayd that the Speaker wishes to escape imprison- ment. The second records the answers that he receives from inanimate nature. Each of the three entities gives an answer that in some way is a reflection of the reSpondent, meaning that the inanimate realm provides no clue to the solution of the Speaker's problem. Carroll Arnett mistakenly associates "the kingdom of bang and blab" with the adult world, when he says that the Spirit struggles ". . . so that it may enter into the understanding and moral reSponsibility which the conscious 'kingdom of bang and blab' requires as prerequisites to any truly creative growth 1 in the world of history." "Bang" and "blah" are both echoic words and as such continue the mirror images of the preceding lines. The "kingdom" is the realm of inanimate matter, which cannot aid the individual human being in his attempt to understand the mysteries of death and identity. The invocation of the bird, snail, and worm introduced images of motion, and the last six verse paragraphs of "The Flight" develop them 1 . "Minimal to Maximal," CB (1957), #15. Atnett's statement provides another example of the-failure to recognize the metaphysical level of Roethke's poetry. 137 fully. The first of the six pictures the boy running over ground that seems to be soft with graves and cluttered with gravestones: Running lightly over Spongy ground, Past the pasture of flat stones, The three elms, The sheep strewn on a field. . . . Lack of details makes it impossible to tell whether the sheep are animate or inanimate. The second of these paragraphs reintroduces the pond-wound image, now clearly described as a stagnant pond (as was implied by the earlier words, "soft pond of repose"): Hunting along the river, Down among the rubbish, the bug-riddled foliage, By the muddy pond-edge, by the bog-holes, By the shrunken lake, hunting, in the heat of summer. In this image two important meanings are present. First, the pond symbolizes the Speaker's unconscious mind, and second it represents the merging point between the living and dead, and between the animate and inanimate. In other words, it represents the place where one might seek answers to questions about the origins of life. The protagonist .iS making this search because he has been confronted by death. To put it in the Simplest terms: an obsession is driving him to discover whether he was once dust and will return to dust, or whether something in him is immortal. This search (or flight) is, in other terms, the search for identity, of which Mills and Kunitz have made so much.1 lMills writes: E'The Lost Son'] . . . drops us into the midst of the child's pursuit of freedom and singular identity . . ." ("The Lyric of the Self," p. 13.) Kunitz writes of the fourteen narratives: "The protagonist, who recurrently undertakes the dark journey into his own underworld, is engaging in a quest for Spiritual identity. The quest is simultaneously a flight, for he is being pursued by the man he has become, implacable, lost, soiled, confused. In order to find himelf he must lose himelf by re- experiencing all the stages of his growth, by reenacting all the trans- mutations of his being from seed-time to maturity." ("Roethke: Poet of Transformations," The New Republic, CLII [1965], 2Q.) Another way of saying 138 II The title of Section II, "The Pit," is a grave-nest image. Mills makes this point in other terms when he writes: ". . . The pit, which needs partially to be viewed as a female symbol, signifies the place of origins but now becomes a Sign of defeat, even in death."1 As a female symbol, the pit is both the female genitals and the womb; as a "Sign" of death it is, of course, the grave. Like the stagnant pond, it is a place where the animate and inanimate, the living and the dead, merge. The Speaker's earlier invocations of various lower forms of life now give way to questions, behind which lies the assumption that ontogeny recapitulates phylogeny. To define his own identity and to understand what death means, he must understand.where life came from and what it is. The Speaker is compelled to raise the questions that he does by the necessity referred to in Kunitz's statement: "In order to find himself he must lose himself by reexperiencing all the stages of his growth, by reenacting all the transmutations of his being from seed-time to "2 maturity. The "stages of growth" and "transmutations" are all the